2019年高考英语全国乙卷书面表达教师下水文

题目

假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括：

1．写信目的：

2．个人优势：

3．能做的事情。

广东省湛江市第一中学 刘小丹

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a student from China. I’m currently taking my summer courses in London.Learning that a Chinese painting exhibition will be held in your gallery, I’m writing to apply for a chance to work as a volunteer.

It’s widely acknowledged that Chinese paintings, one of Chinese traditional art forms and a bridge subjectively showing Chinese value in life and nature, differ greatly from western ones. As a Chinese painting lover who once worked as a volunteer in a Chinese painting show, I think I’m equal to the job. I’m equipped with a wide range of knowledge and the basic skills of Chinese paintings, which enables me to help spread Chinese splendid culture and convey the background,techniques and inner spirit of Chinese paintings to the visitors. Furthermore,I have developed great accuracy and fluency in English and I have a good command of the skills of communication, ensuring the visitors a more comfortable and better viewing experience. I’m convinced that my good performance for the job can live up to your expectations.

Should you favor me with the opportunity? I’d be appreciative if you are kind enough to take my application into account. For more details, please contact me at 12345678. Expecting your earliest reply.

                                                         Yours sincerely,

                                                                  LiHua 

小编使用网络的一个作文打分系统（微软小英作文打分，扫描如下二维码进入可以该网站），得分情况如下：

得分：25

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