写作指导：八步创意读后续写模板
八步创意模板写作
一
情绪：消极情绪
二
细节：进一步解释描写
三
转折：个人的努力或借助外界
四
转机：事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
五
失望：但是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
六
新法：突然有了一个想法（一句话说明这个想法）
七
结局：过了一段时间；事情有了最后的转折
八
总结：点题，呼应前文
（1）消极情绪
典型表达是：
感到（这个可以有很多表达方式，并且可以结合在每一个环节中，可有非谓语动词形式和介词短语）
1. a flush of (表情绪的名词)=a wave of...=a feeling/sense of...一阵...
2.joy/excitement/pride/anger/rage/panic/terror/sorrow/sadness/grief/embarrassment/dispointment/guilt/shame...)
3. (表情绪的名词) flooded over sb=swept over sb
因...颤抖
tremble/shiver/shake (with fear, panic excitement, rage...)
（2）进一步细节描写
典型是：流泪；心里想……
流泪：
1. Tears blurred one's eyes.
2. One's eyes got misty.
3. One's eyes misted/dimmed with tears.泪眼模糊
4. ...be close to tears几乎要哭了
5. tears (roll down one's eyes /cheeks/face)泪水落下
心里想
1. An inner voice told sb that 从句内心的声音告诉某人...
2. ...thought/said to oneself
（3）转折（个人努力或借助外界）
典型是：鼓起勇气或另外一方的鼓励；毫不犹豫
pluck up/take/gather/one's courage (to do...)
毫不犹豫：
1. sb could hardly wait to do sth
2. without a second thought
3. without even thinking
4. without delay
5. without hesitation
（4）事情似乎有了转机，并抱有希望，感到欣慰
典型表达是：
似乎：
1. It was like doing sth 好像...
2. It seemed as if/ that...好像...
希望：
1. hoping that从句：抱着一丝希望
2. see/feel a glimmer of hope 看到一丝希望
3. trying hard to do sth
欣慰：
1. ...breathed a sigh of relief 松了一口气
2. ...sighed with relief 松了一口气
3. (A wave of) relief flooded through /washed over sb
4. to one's relief, ..使人欣慰的/放心的是
（5）但是还是问题还是没有解决或出现了新问题
典型是：不幸的是；不知道做什么
不幸的是：
1. But bad luck for sb, ...但是某人真不走运
2. but in vain
3. but without success
4. but no use
不知道做什么
1. Sb did sth, wondering what to do next.
2. Sb did sth, not knowing what to do next.
3. Sb did sth, unsure of what to do next.
4. Sb was at a loss what to do.
5. Sb was in a dilemma about whether to do or not.感到难以决定...
（6）突然有了一个想法：一句话表示想法
典型：某人想到/明白...;有了主意
1. It suddenly occurred to sb that从句=It hit sb that 从句=It struck me that 从句 =It dawned on sb that 从句
2. (idea, thought...) occurred /came to sb.=...came /flashed into one's mind=...crowded in one's mind
3. One's mind began to race
（7）皆大欢喜：过了一段时间，事情有了最后的转折
过了一段时间
1. not long after that,...=shortly afterwards, ...=before long, ...=It didn't take long before从句=It took some time before从句不久, ...
2. for an instant/moment一瞬间
有了结果
1. To one's surprise(delight)/Strangely enough, it turned out that从句
2. But on second thoughts, ...但是转而一想，...
3. But what happened next was pure magic.接下来发生的非常奇妙
皆大欢喜：参考（1）
（8）最后总结，点题
典型是：
直到...才意识到...
1.倒装句：Not until 时间状语 did sb realize/notice that 从句
2.强调句：It was only时间状语 that sb realized that 从句
还记得某人的话；还在某人的脑海中
1. One's words (echoed/rang out) in one's ears.
2. One's words(voice/song) lingered /whispered in one's mind/head.
3. One's head was still full of...
经历与教训
1. What a/an...lesson sb taught me(sb learned from sb)! (valuable/useful/great/painful)
2. What a/an...experience sb had!
(enjoyable/pleasant/wonderful/unforgettable/memorable/interesting/valuable)
3. Down deep in one's heart, ...在某人的内心深处
Part2:高考真题实战演练
实战演练1：读后续写浙江卷（2016森林遇险）
夫妻旅游途中吵架，妻子独自离开，述路在树林里，直升飞机来了几次授救但没有看见她。她感到很失望，
One weekend in July,Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “I’m going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away.
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.
“Tom! ”she cried. “Help!”
No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.
Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.
As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.
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Paragraph 2:
It was daybreak when Jane woke up.
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第一段：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.(但是没有直升机来了，天又黑了。)
读后续写 | 续写 | |
1.A wave of terror swept over her. | 一阵恐怖的浪潮席卷了她。 | 1.情绪 |
2.Her heart pounding fiercely and her palm sweating, an inner voice told her that she had to find a safe place. | 她的心剧烈地跳动着，手心冒汗，一个内在的声音告诉她，她必须找到一个安全的地方。 | 2.细节：详述情绪 |
3.Tired and terrified as she was,Jane plucked her courage to feel the way. | 虽然她很累，也很害怕，但简鼓起勇气去感受这条路。 | 3.转折∶ 个人努力 |
4.Luckily, it didn't take long before she found a cave. 5. Sighing with relief, she felt a glimmer of hope, saying to herself."Tomorrow is another day." | 幸运的是，没过多久她就找到了一个洞穴。 松了一口气，她感到了一丝希望。对自己说。“明天又是新的一天。” | 4. 转机：成功、希望来了。 |
With that, she went to sleep, in whose dream her husband kept her company. | 说完，她就去睡觉了，她丈夫在梦里陪伴着她。 | 衔接句 |
第二段：It was daybreak when Jane woke up.简醒来的时候天已经亮了。
读后续写 | 续写 | |
1.Hungry and disappointed, she found not any helicopter overhead,at a loss what to do. | 1.饥饿和失望，她发现头顶上没有任何直升机，不知所措。 | 再度失望（出现新问题） |
2.It suddenly dawned on her that she should find a big open area first. 3. Having gobbling down some blackberries, she can't wait to set off. 4. After what seemed a century,such an area did come into sight. 5. Her face brightened up. | 2.她突然明白，她应该先找一个大的空地。 3. 她狼吞虎咽地吃了些黑莓，迫不及待地要出发了。 4.好像过了一个世纪之后，这样的地区确实出现了。 5.她的脸变亮了。 | 突然有了办法。 |
6. What a coincidence that meanwhile, a helicopter was flying towards her. 7. Upon its landing, out dashed her husband who hugged Jane tightly, tears welling up in their heart. | 6.与此同时，一架直升机正朝她飞来，真是巧合。 7.她的丈夫紧紧地拥抱着简，眼泪涌上心头。 | 结果解决问题，巧不成书，皆大欢喜。 |
8. It was at the moment that they decided not to quarrel any more but learned to compromise. | 8.就在这时，他们决定不再争吵了，而是学会了妥协。 | （总结） |
实战演练2：读后续写浙江卷（2018年6月）
父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。临走叔叔告诫我们不要走偏了路（"Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!"）。一路上，风景优美，让人陶醉。
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don’t be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!" "OK! " my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
注意：
（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
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Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
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Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.
读后续写 | 八步思路 |
1. A wave of nervousness swept over me especially when the horse ran like crazy. | （情绪） |
2. My heart pounding and my palms sweating, an inner voice told me that I had to calm down. | （细节详述） |
3. Though in a panic, I plucked my courage to pull on the reigns. | （转折：个人努力） |
4. Luckily, it didn’t take long before I settled down the horse. | （转机：成功，希望来了） |
5. Just at that moment, Dad ran over, gasping for air. | （衔接句：新问题来了） |
6. “Boy, we are way off the track.” He said seriously, a look of concern spreading across his face. |
Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.
1. Hungry and frustrated, we tried to find a way out but in vain. | (努力，失败) |
2. It suddenly dawned on me we could rode down the river nearby. | （突然有了办法） |
3. Unexpectedly, the river brought us to the familiar track at last. | （开始做） |
4. After what seemed two hours, Uncle Paul’s farm house did come into sight. | （成功了） |
5. My father’s face brightened up, so did mine. | （感受） |
6. Upon our arrival, Uncle Paul couldn’t wait to asked us, “Where have you been? I am just calling 911.” | （幽默对话） |
7. “To Alice’s Wonderland” my father answered, winking at me with a big grin. | |
8. What an unforgettable experience we had! | (总结) |
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