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Hello, ladies and gentlemen.

 

Have you ever felt slightly dizzy or sick after spending a little bit too long in front of a computer screen? Well, if you have, this might mean that you’ve suffered from a new phenomenon that has become known as cybersickness. And I want to talk to you a little bit about what cybersickness is, why it occurs, and offer you some solutions, in case you ever suffer from it.

 

So, as you may have inferred, cybersicknessis a sense of wooziness, light headedness, or nausea that comes from prolonged use of digital technologies. And these technologies are particularly virtual reality, fast paced video games, or films, but even rapid scrolling on your telephone or a smartphone, on your tablet, or on your computer.

 

Now the symptoms of cybersickness are usually very mild, so, as I said, slight feeling of sickness or dizziness. But cybersickness at its more extreme end can in fact bring about extreme headaches and a sense of confusion.

 

I'd like to go very briefly into the science behind cybersickness. Many of you may well suffer also from car sickness, or to be more technical, motion sickness, and this is when you get in a car, or in a boat, and you start to feel a bit dizzy, or a bit sick. Well, the reason behind this, the technical reason behind this is that when you're in a car, you don't visually perceive the movement, but your body feels it, and this creates an imbalance in your inner ear, an imbalance between the different senses. When you're playing a virtual reality game, or when you're scrolling on your telephone, you SEE the movement with your eyes, but you DON’T actually FEEL it. So again, you have the opposite form of imbalance in your inner ear, and this causes the sense of queasiness or dizziness.

 

So now that you understand what cybersickness is, I'd like to offer you some solutions in case you ever suffer from it. First of all, after this extended use at the computer, if you find yourself feeling a bit dizzy, you should sit down at, perhaps in front of a table that does flat and stable surface. Put your hands flat on the table, and then focus at a point in the distance, a still point, or on the horizon. And this serves to recalibrate your senses, so tells your eyes that you're not moving, while your body also feels this sense of stability and the lack of movement. However, more importantly, I would say that if you find that you suffer from cybersickness frequently, you might want to think about reducing the amount of time you spend staring at a screen.

 

Thank you.




详细解析




1. 原文逻辑

①介绍话题:引入“晕屏症”的概念,概述语篇主要内容

②晕屏症的定义、成因

③晕屏症的症状:恶心、头晕(轻微)——头痛、精神错乱(严重)

④晕屏症及晕动症背后的原理:感官不平衡/不匹配

⑤应对措施:长时间使用电子设备后如何放松;有什么效果;频发需要减少使用时间

 

2. 参考词汇

nausea/queasiness恶心

wooziness/dizziness 头晕,晕眩

car sickness/motion sickness 晕车/晕动症

inner ear 内耳

 

3. 可能出现的问题

cybersickness一词不会翻译,可字面译为“电脑病”。

 

描述部分(第四、第五部分)可能出现“记得住但说不出”的问题,不用追求与原文完全一致,通过“视觉化”(visualisation)的技巧记住主要信息,输出时可以做一些顺序上的调整来确保流畅。可以对啰嗦、重复部分适当概括,没有重要语义的话语可以省略,但是不要遗漏核心信息。




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