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剩余29天,英语作文“魔板”怎么记?

2017-11-23 考研君 中公考研网


今天11月23日,离12月23号初试,只剩29天时间了。身经百“战”的同学们都知道,考前的分分秒秒都是万分宝贵的。既然时间有限,那同学们一定要学会把时间用在“刀刃”上。对考研英语来说,最后的冲刺阶段,专门复习英语作文的成效将会非常大。今天考研君就来给考研党们说一下考研英语“魔板”怎么记忆。


之前有童鞋在后台问考研君:英语作文模板痕迹重会不会被扣分,那么如何避免过重的模板痕迹呢? 今天我们就来通过实例来解答一下这个问题  !


我们结合一道非常具有代表性的真题来进行写作。这道题是2010年(英语一)大作文题目。

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,                                         

2) explain its intended meaning, and then

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)


大家肯定对这道题十分熟悉。按照大作文评分标准中的“内容完整”,我们需要将大作文写成3段话:第一段“描述图画”;第二段“阐述寓意”;第三段“个人评论”。这三个要求根本不用去记,因为题目当中已经有了。


第一段的段落思路:“直观评价、整体描述、细节描述、过渡句”。


第一句我们只需要对这幅图画进行直观评价就可以了。可以写成What a interesting picture it is! 怎么记?只要记住这是一个感叹句句式即可。


第二句记忆的时候,弄清楚前后两个非限制性定语从句。As is vividly depicted in the photo, a hot pot is boiling a lot of different things with much hot steam gushing, which successfully captures our eyes.


第三句可以写成After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that many kinds of culture have been mixed in the same small hot pot, symbolizing the exchange of many different kinds of culture from all over the world. 在记忆的时候,只需记住是“状语+it形式主语句+主干”即可。


Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed deserves a further analysis. 这是最后一句,相信大家能立马分清:这是主语从句。


接着看第二段。第二段的思路是:“关键句(总)、具体原因(分)、结果分析”。


以下是中公考研学员的习作。 

Theoretically, the phenomenon presented by the drawing brings us both advantages and disadvantages. As for my part, the former outweighs its latter. On the top of list is that the same earth village could bring us much more commerce opportunities, which help the whole development of the world. In addition, there is the other point that no one can ignore. It is no doubt that more friendly cooperation from different countries may promote the development of diplomatic relations between countries. No other case can better illustrate the phenomenon than the picture above.


其实,第一句就是“主谓宾”的结构,后面的原因句子,“On the top of list is that...”是我们教大家的框架句子。“In addition, there is the other point that...”这样的句式其实就是就是“There be +that从句”。


来看最后一段。段落思路是“关键句+具体建议+结尾句”。由于本题属于“社会现象”,所以可以写成以下段落。记忆这些句子时,注意句式:it形式主语句式、倒装句等。


According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, mass media tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of the value of global communication between mass kinds of culture .


所以同学们在准备考研英语作文时一定要把握住每个段落的思路,每个句式的特点。一定要弄清楚每个句子怎么构成的,只有先理解句子的语法构成,才能顺利记住这些“神通广大”的句子,并且将它们补齐写成自己特有的亮点句子。


考研君提醒2018的考生们:不要死套模板,在具体分析寓意和个人评论时,还是要自己写一写,根据考题来进行评论,防止内容空泛,缺乏生气。



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