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老张对救命魔板句的使用说明：
1.这些魔板句子的来源，是参考了市面上很多的作文内容，进行筛选和调整形成的。
2.有的句子较为复杂，可以根据自己情况缩写，但是使用的前提是真的理解这些句子。
3.坚持背诵句子，准备句子比单纯的魔板靠谱。因为大多数同学准备的是社会现象的话题（而且以消极为主），但是考察人生哲理或一些模糊话题时（比如阳光和黑暗），这时通用魔板就有问题了。另外根据我们的经验，每个角度掌握3-4句，一共准备20到30句就肯定能搞定大多数的话题。
4.注意里面的关键词，对照我们以前的话题库，思考下这些话可以适用的内容。
5.为什么要分角度？我们记住，第一段描述图画和图表，揭露主题，也可以评论趋势；第二段主要分析原因和结果；第三段主要总结主题和措施，有时候可以加上趋势。在第二段的原因分析时，加上例子和对比。
6.我们最后的救命魔板其实就是在这些魔板句子的基础上，按照增加主题句、过渡句的方式组成的。
7.所有句子的难点分析将录制视频，和救命魔板一起在微信公众号发布。
注：今晚的救命魔板句超长、超干，请备好水和纸巾，没毅力的请屏幕左上角直走，不送。
适用于英语一
注意描述图画时，总体，中间，对比，标题等元素。
■ 1.The cartoon displays a very special and profound theme:__________
■2.In the middle of the picture stands a pretty American girl with a warm smile, who is in Chinese traditional clothes. （注意用的是倒装）
■ 3.As is illustrated above, the drawing describes a ridiculous(though-provoking)scene, in which two persons have two different attitudes toward a half-filled bottle.
■ 4.Here is a lively cartoon in which we can see two people are making efforts to move a big rock. As the caption of the picture goes, we should do things according to our resources and capacity. In other words, one should be sensible whether his or her goal is within his or her power.（如果有标题的图，就记得用上caption）
■ 5.As is subtly depicted in the cartoon above, a movie star is making advertising for a fake product.
■ 6.As can be seen from the picture, there is a ship with numerous fish in the picture one, while only one fish left with a multitude of ships in the picture two.（图形对比）
■ 7.In the picture, a Chinese teacher and two foreign students are posing for picture, with a whiteboard in the background which reads: Chinese fever.（汉语热现象）
■ 8.In the above picture, two groups of students without clear direction are on the run to their destination, one group heading to success and the others to failure. （图形内部对比，其中第二句用的非谓）
适用于英语一/二
往往在第一段结束或者第二段开始。
■ 1.Voices for and against e-books have been heard since their birth.
■ 2.Email, for instance, was a brand new phenomenon merely a couple years ago, but now it has become an indispensable part of our life.
■ 3.The rapid development of the Internet has given birth to numerous phenomena that people could have barely imagined merely a few decades ago.
■ 4.It is never exaggerating to argue that computer has profoundly influenced every aspect of college life.
■ 5.With the rapid spread of cell phone and its decreasing cost in China, cell phone seems to become a necessary equipment that accompanies college students day and night.
■ 6.The picture describes a prevailing phenomenon, which__________
■ 7.What the picture conveys is a life philosophy: success doesn’t mean the absence of failures（分号后面用适用人生成长的格言）
■ 8.To work or not to work, that is a question for many college students.
■ 9.The carton alerts us that__________
用于句首或句尾
■ 1.However, with the emergence of TV and computer in modern age, less and less people choose to read books.
■ 2.Such a trend of urbanization is significantly transforming the way people behave in work, study and life.
■ 3.We are fully optimistic that our life will be in continual improvement by means of science and technology.
■ 4.The contemporary society has seen a trend of diversification in the field of music, along with the appearance of its various forms-pop music, rock music and country music.
■ 5.As far as communication is concerned, the using of computers is by no means detrimental.
用于第二段
用于第二段，注意所有的事情原因都有内外因两个角度。
■ 1.There are two main reasons accounting for the loss of social trust.
■ 2.Thanks to the convenience of internet, students can make full use of the abundant online resources to obtain useful information in a speedy way.
■ 3.The consequence of this trend can be troublesome or even disastrous, bringing not only inconvenience but even financial and psychological loss to ordinary people.
■ 4.The influence of science and technology is immense in virtually every aspect of modern life.
■ 5.Objectively speaking, this issue should be analyzed in terms of two aspects.
■ 6.A couple of factors can account for the above-mentioned phenomenon.
■ 7.Rapid population growth in urban areas is also responsible for the increase of garbage.
■ 8.There are many factors that can contribute to a person’s success in life. A person is more likely to succeed if he is industrious, honest, intelligent, responsible, self-confident, creative, and cooperative, whether he is at school or at work.（人生成长类话题第二段适用）
■ 9.But of all the possible characteristics that contribute to success, I would single out individuality, the quality that makes one different from the other common minds.（连着上一句，人生成长类话题通用）
喝口水，缓缓先~
用于第二段
往往用于第二段，人生成长类话题推荐使用。
■ 1.Cases are not rare in the recent couple of years the netizens release the individual’s confidential information on internet, such as bank account, telephone number.
■ 2.Countless facts in life tell us that in order to be successful in life, one must select a correct direction.
■ 3.A multitude of examples can be used to prove this point, but the following case is the most persuasive one.
■ 4.A good case in point is the quick development of Chinese economy and the environmental problems it causes. （注意，如果考一些抽象的图，比如事情有两面，阳光和阴影，那就可以把自己准备的人与环境的作文作为例子）
■ 5.Bill Gates gave up studying for a degree and joined the network he is interested in, and finally become one of the world’s richest man.
■ 6. Helen Keller is a proof that great things can happen to everyone, even though he or she may be living under an underprivileged condition, even handicapped, if he or she works hard and never gives up.
■ 7.Just take myself as an example\My personal experience is a perfect example to illustrate this point.（在举不出例子的时候，就以自己为例，还记得小作文课程上让大家准备的四句自我介绍，这时候稍微删减就派上用场了）
■8.A classmate of mine, Tom, who used to be a top student in our class and a promising student, has recently indulged himself in computer games. He wants to be another MaYun. However, the consequence of his obsession is that he failed in several final examinations. He is now struggling to secure a job. (也可以举隔壁老王的例子，特别是消极类话题时）
用于第二段
特别原因不好分析时使用。
■ 1.Someone might be inclined to regard it as a funny cartoon only. However, the purpose of this picture is really worth our careful consideration.
■ 2.Many of us misunderstand our life value lies in “take” instead of “give”. I strongly advocate what counts most in life is what we do for others.(给予还是索取）
■ 3.There is a heated discussion today about whether the parents should send their children studying. Those who oppose this phenomenon argue that it brings a great burden and pressure to the family, not to mention the students themselves. But people who are in favor of such behavior maintain that children will be more competitive and well prepared for the future career.（出国热）
■ 4.As regards the farmer migration into the cities, there has been a heated discussion among the general public. The majority of people believe that this mass migration is beneficial to the development of both the countryside and the cities. Other people, however, hold that there are more disadvantages arising from this migration movement.（农民工进城问题）
用于第三段
所有的措施都包括，提高意识，行动执行两个层次；所有的措施都可以拉上政府，社会，和个人三个主体。
■ 1.It is hoped that relevant laws and regulations can be enacted to protect privacy on the internet.
■ 2.Moreover, the whole society is calling for a wide social awareness of internet privacy security.
■ 3.Therefore, I strongly advocate a sweeping campaign in the educational system to eradicate the problem of plagiarism.
■ 4.I firmly believe that every member of the world should participate in the endeavor to revive the appreciation of social trust.
■ 5.It is imperative that we should take a good attitude towards setbacks.(首先可以说调整态度）
■ 6.From my point of view, school administrator should recognize the problem and devise special courses for the specific purpose.
■ 7.For us college students, I maintain that it is still of much importance to foster the habit of reading classic books.
■ 8.The premise for solving the problem is that students need to be adequately aware of he relation between learning and teaching.（可以说解决问题的前提）
■ 9.In this sense, it is of utter importance to implement effective measures so as to improve students’ mental health.
■ 10.Besides, the school administration should also devote more resources to strengthening its plan to combat this issue.
■ 11.It is one of media’s primary responsibilities to expand the awareness of psychological health among students.
■ 12.Therefore, try to start it from ourselves now. Let us all work together to enrich our spirit, improve our personality, understand the concept of honor and disgrace, and be prepared for the promising future.
■ 13.First and most, the government should enact necessary laws and regulations, and implement effective measures so that this phenomenon will be wiped out.
■ 14.Secondly, the whole society, especially the media, is obliged to publicize the urgency of this issue and by all means raise public awareness.
■ 15.Last but not least, the school is supposed to promote real and qualified education to root out corruption.
■ 16.Ultimately, all the aforementioned measures can jointly eliminate this problem.
■ 17.Measures can and should be taken to address this issue. People should be educated to increase their environmental awareness. Incentive should be given by the government to encourage citizens to reduce the use of disposable items and recycle as much as possible. If possible, more factories and companies should move to the countryside to prevent it happens again. While these may cause some inconveniences, we will be amply rewarded with a better environment.
用于最后一段
总结，重复话题，也可以说一说趋势，包括展望未来和社会角度两个方面。
■ 1. Embracing the advent of digital age, we have every reason to believe that it will make our society a better place.
■ 2. Nevertheless, the tendency not only goes against the goal of building a harmonious society, but also harms the humans’ mentality.
■ 3. All in all, great importance should be attached and special attention should be given to the study of Chinese.
■ 4. Whether you are strong or weak, you must keep fighting to succeed. No matter who you are or what your status is, you must protect your dream.
■ 5. We should, therefore, follow our own heart. Keep in mind that there is the happiness which come from creative effort (cooperation, correct choice, positive attitude), whether in ordinary work or starting our own business.（适用幸福类话题）
■ 6. Only with our love and contribution, I am deeply convicted, our society can become more harmonious and prosperous.（爱心和奉献）
■7. We, young people, sometimes, naively assume that time can wait for us. The self-evident truth is that only by taking care of the present, will the future days take care of themselves.（适用时光类话题）
■ 8. As a proverb goes, which is just demonstrated in my personal case: opportunities are only available to the prepared minds.（机会类话题，结合自己的例子）
■ 9. We should consider failure and defeat as the springboards to new achievements or the to the next level of accomplishment. Unless we are willing to try, try again and again regardless of failure, success won’t happen.（失败和挫折话题）
■ 10. Admittedly, there is no immediate solution to this problem, but my suggestion is that more people from all walks of life should join hands and contribute their own effort. （也可以让步说下这个问题不容易）
■ 11. If we can take the concrete and practical measures, we will finally reach our shared goals step by step.
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A：老张的这篇文章，以及看到这里的你。
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