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真正高分的句子就得这!么!练!经典百句搞定口语和写作

2016-10-26 Tony Tian NativeStudy



对于备考托福的同学来说,在面对写作的时候会因为没有思路、想到汉语但写不出满意的英语,和脑中没有干货而痛苦不堪。


继上一期精选的十句写作题材后,今天带大家继续学习如何写出高分地道的句子。如果能按照要求完成这份材料的口译、精读和仿写练习,你的快速造句能力将有大幅度提升,写作和口语都将受益。


▼ 学习如何正确使用例句


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▼ 一起跟着我练一遍


Step 1:

看中文句,口译成英文,并将口译的内容重新笔译到纸上


事实上,即使在现今瞬息万变的世界里,父母的知识水平仍然对孩子有很大的影响,尤其是年幼的孩子。


学生口译:

In fact, even in this change world, parent’s knowledge level still have influence to children, especially young children. 


Step 2:

读英文原句,对比翻译之间的差异


英文原句:

In fact, even in the rapidly changing world, the scope of parents' knowledge still has great influence on their children, especially on younger ones.


我的差距:

In fact, even in this change world, parent’s knowledge level still have influence to children, especially young children


Step 3:

积累好的单词、短语、语块、句型


rapidly changing world -> change world

scope of parents’ knowledge -> knowledge level

have influence on -> have influence to


Step 4:

重新口译本句


  • even in the rapidly changing world

  • the scope of parents' knowledge

  • still has great influence on

  • especially on younger ones


事实上,即使在现今瞬息万变的世界里,父母的知识水平仍然对孩子有很大的影响,尤其是年幼的孩子。


反复以上步骤,直到自然地口译出正确的原句版本(清楚地表达本意):

In fact, even in the rapidly changing world, the scope of parents' knowledge still has great influence on their children, especially on younger ones.


以下内容欢迎同学们自行练习,注意务必:


1. 不要直接看答案,需要自己思考的过程和对比改错,才能修正自己的表达,更加印象深刻。

2. 同一句句子,务必注意多次反复去练习才会更加有效。简单的背诵,而不试图去体会表达的含义,是很低效的学习哦。


01 师者,视你如己出,助你于困难之中,解你于困惑之地。


  • A teacher, who treats you as if you were his own child, will give you a hand when you encounter difficulties; he will render his advice when you are in a dilemma.


02 虽然孩子们需要不同类型的老师,但父母可以无条件地提供最大的情感支持。


  • Although children will generally need a great diversity of teachers, parents can provide them the greatest emotional support in their lives without a substitute.


03 虽然这可能会被认为是一个省时间的好方法,但是这个目光短浅的看法可能会带来极大的危害。


  • Though it might be thought of as a great way to save time, this is a shortsighted idea that could actually lead to a world of harm.


04 书籍是人们追求知识的指路灯。但是我们需要做的是亲自体验并学习新的事物以获得更好的生活。


  • Books are like a guiding light in one's pursuit for knowledge. But it is left to us to experience it first hand and learn new things for the betterment of our lives.


05 人们担心社区的社会结构和传统生活会受到干扰,但是我们要明白社会需要进步,我们不能固步自封。


  • There are also worries that the social structure of this community will be changed and the traditional life will be affected. We should understand that our society needs to evolve and we cannot always stay in the old time.


06 电视似乎控制了我们的娱乐选择这个事实近期引起了一个令人关注的问题——电视是否损害了家庭和朋友的交流和关系?    

 

  • The fact that television seems to control our choice of leisure and entertainment has recently brought a problem to focus: whether has television destroyed communication and connection among friends and family?


07 人会成为他生活的地区的文化的一部分,人们的思考方式、穿衣打扮、谈吐举止、饮食偏好等,所有的这些都影响着和塑造着一个人。


  • He becomes a part of the culture of that community where he lives and the ideals, the line of thinking, the way people dress, the way they speak, the types of food they like, all of these are influential and somehow makes the person what he is.


08 显而易见的是,喧嚣和浮华的城市带来的是更多的压力和恒久的焦虑以及日夜的煎熬。


  • The obvious things brought about by noisy and flashy city life are more pressure and forever-lasting anxiety, agonizing and torching people's mind day in and day out.


09 有人认为取得成功依靠自己的能力,有人认为取得成功依靠运气,而我倾向于前一种人的观点。


  • Some people believed that they achieved success by their own ability, whereas other people believed that they did it by luck. As for me, I would like to side with the former people.


10 换位思考能让你更加了解处于困境中的人的感受,因此提供更加合适的帮助。


  • Putting yourself in someone else's shoes makes you understand better the feelings of somebody who is in trouble, and consequently, offer appropriate help.


        都练习完今天的10句英文好句了吗,如果有任何疑问或心得可以在文章里给我留言讨论噢,我会尽快给你解答。- Tony Tian


下期,Tony老师会将剩余经典百句全部呈现给大家。大家跟着一起练习吧!


上期回顾:

【10天100句】申请季快到了,你写作咋还没到28呢!



作者简介


香港大学一级荣誉学士、硕士、院长荣誉奖。

TOEFL 115分(总分120),其中阅读30分、听力30分、写作29分。

4年托福教学经验。

帮助学生提分幅度记录:阅读9-30,听力8-30,写作15-28。

帮助学生提分速度纪录:7天16分,86-102。


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