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近些年随着信息技术的飞速发展，大量的信息可以通过计算机和互联网轻易并且即时地获得。
学生口译：
These years, with the fast development of technology, a great amount of information can be easily gotten in time by computer and internet.
读英文原句，对比翻译之间的差异
英文原句：
With the exponential leaps of the information technology in the recent years, massive amount of information can be easily and instantaneously obtained through computers and the Internet.
我的差距：
These years, with the fast development of technology, a great amount of informationcan be easily gotten in time by computer and internet.
积累好的单词、短语、语块、句型
These years -> in the recent years
the fast development of -> the exponential leaps of the information
a great amount of -> massive
in time -> instantaneously
get by -> obtain through
重新口译本句
with the exponential leaps
of the information technology
in the recent years
massive amount of information
can be easily and instantaneously obtained
through computers and the Internet
近些年随着信息技术的飞速发展，大量的信息可以通过计算机和互联网轻易并且即时地获得。
反复以上步骤，直到自然地口译出正确的原句版本（清楚地表达本意）：
With the exponential leaps of the information technology in the recent years, massive amount of information can be easily and instantaneously obtained through computers and the Internet.
“近些年”可以用these years，但是in the recent years也要会用。表示时间的副词需要大家尽可能多地积累，很多时候，寻找规律不如直接积累高效。
Exponential leap 是非常好的“具象”表达，用“指数级的”代替“飞速”，用“跨越”代替“发展”，是优秀的替换策略。
A great amount of可以替换成massive amount of。massive作为great有益的替换，可以学习。
Instantaneously的记忆方法：可以用instant来记。
可以多积累表示“获得”的单词：这里的obtain替换get就是一例。
Internet前面要加the。
以下内容欢迎同学们自行练习，注意务必：
1. 不要直接看答案，需要自己思考的过程和对比改错，才能修正自己的表达，更加印象深刻。
2. 同一句句子，务必注意多次反复去练习才会更加有效。简单的背诵，而不试图去体会表达的含义，是很低效的学习哦。01 世间万物都有优缺点，主要在于人类如何使用它们。
There are advantages and disadvantages of everything created on earth. It depends on human beings to utilize or exploitthem.
02 大量关于身体素质和心理能力之间关系的调查，得出了良好的身体条件才能创造强大的精神力的结论。
A lot of research concerning the relationship between physical fitness and mental abilities come to the conclusion that a good physical condition creates a strong mental power.
03 首先，一个好的邻居应该是体贴的。以你希望被对待的方式对待他人是一个让人尊敬的基本素质。
In the first place, a good neighbor should be considerate. Knowing that you should treat others the way you expect to betreated is a quality that makes people respect。
04 看来，在如此多的品质，如可靠性、诚实、乐于助人，耐心，很难选择出其中的一个，因为每个都有其独特的优势。
It seems, among so many qualities such as reliability, honesty, helpfulness, and patience, very difficult to prefer one to another because eachof them has its unique advantages.
05 首先，作为一个初学者，老师的存在会给你提供大量的基础知识，这会成为你日后知识系统坚实的基础。
Firstly, when you are a beginner to a new subject, ateacher is able to provide you with a lot of fundamental knowledge, which is ready to become a solid basis for your later knowledge system.
06 连续和过度的娱乐不仅浪费金钱而且损害人的健康，这是人们都不想要的后果。
Consecutive and excessive recreations not only thrift money but also deteriorate people's health, which is the last thing one would like to encounter.
07 处于快车道上的生活对于我们而言是忙碌和乏味的，有时疲惫的我们并不情愿去准备生活。
Life in the fast lane today has turned out to be so hectic and tedious tous that at times we feel exhausted and therefore unwilling to prepare our food.
08 众所周知，进入一个全新的知识领域通常需要灵活的头脑和对新信息的不断获取。
As we all know, entering a brand new area of knowledge usually demands sharp altering of minds and a gradual accumulation of newinformation.
09 好领导的品质有公平地对待员工、关心员工的情绪、对待员工像家人和以身作则。
A good supervisor treats his workers fairly, cares fortheir feelings, treat them as family members, and set a good example for them.
10 如今，科技的发展对人口众多的大城市有直接的影响，造成了城市和农村生活方式的天壤之别。
Nowadays, technological development is directed to suchpeople-crowded places such as big cities, resulting in significant differencesof lifestyles between people living in the town and in the countryside.
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