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Which跳跃指代专项精讲 | 长难句训练营

2017-09-03 Jackie Zeng NativeStudy


作者简介:Jackie Zeng,GMAT 760, V40, TOEFL阅读满分,新加坡Quantitative Finance硕士毕业。NativeStudy资深导师,三年教学经验,数千学生好评。教学经验丰富,注重于训练RC的逻辑框架和学生阅读能力的提高。


注意:本文中所有的讲解句子,均出自官方题源的GMAT OG,和GMAT权威学习素材Manhattan GMAT的阅读部分。讲解一律不分析缺乏可信度的其他第三方素材。


文章有点长,可能会没耐心,不如先看一段视频,平复一下心情。


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  • 接着问题1,先送大家一个句子:


The overwhelmingly agrarian nature of economy generated outright opposition to banks, which were seen as monopolistic institutions controlled by an elite group of planters.


这句话什么意思?


1.不知道…

2.农场主垄断经济,反对银行业?

3.农场主反对银行,结果被银行被看作垄断者?


大家可能不耐烦了:一句话至于吗,差不多知道意思不就行了?

 

  • 可是,GMAT素来是“哪里不会考哪里”,问题2:



这是阅读中的一道题,定位点就是上述例句,你选什么?

第一,提炼题干的主干:

Opposition to banks in the South stemmed from the fact that banks …

      

第二,拆解定位句:

1. the overwhelmingly agrarian nature of economy opposes to banks

2. banks were seen as monopolistic institutions controlled by an elite group of planters


第三,考的就是拆解出来的第2句:

Opposition to banks in the South stemmed from the fact that banks were seen as monopolistic institutions controlled by an elite group of planters.


第四,答案选什么呢?选A:

选项:Opposition to banks inthe South stemmed from the fact that banks did not benefit more than a small minority of the people.

原文:Opposition to banks inthe South stemmed from the fact thabanks were seen as monopolistic institutions controlled by an elite group of planters.

 

如果我再告诉你,阅读遍地都是这种考法,你还会觉得我烦吗?

 

  • 接下来问题3:which修饰到底是什么?


要解决这个问题,咱们得先来看看:


  • 问题3.1:什么是noun modifier?


简单来说,作为名词的修饰;详细来说,就得看Manhattan了。



总结:Noun Modifier是用来回答who, what, which, where之类问题的名词的修饰成分。


  • 问题3.2:noun modifier和which指代有什么关系呢?


接着问题3.1多读几页Manhattan,会冒出下面这句话:

"Noun modifiers are often introduced by relative pronouns such as the following: Which That Who Whose Whom Where When"

 

言外之意就是,which其实是一种noun modifier。另外,如果你记得上次讲的comma+Ving,你应该要记得这张图:

关于Comma+V-ing可查看:Comma+V-ing专项精讲 | 长难句训练营


总结:which指代 = noun modifier,修饰名词。

 

  • 问题4:which指代如何修饰名词?


其实也就是“就近修饰”还是“跳跃指代”的问题。


  • 4.1 什么是就近修饰?


先看几个例子:

Sue placed CAT on the couch.

The CAT owned by Sue is playful.


cat是名词,而on the couch,owned by Sue就近修饰这个名词cat。

 

一般来说,noun modifier一般都是就近修饰。


 

但换个例句:

Crime has recently decreased in our neighborhood, which has led to a rise in property values.

隔壁犯罪案件减少→财产增多了,符合逻辑,好像是对的?

 

这也是Manhattan的例句,根据书里的说法:which就近修饰our neighborhood,后半句是our neighborhood has led to a rise in property values,句意错了。

 

如果要改,可以是:

1. The recent decrease in crime in our neighborhood has led to a rise in property values.

2. Crime has recently decreased in our neighborhood, leading to a rise in property values.

 

总结:which一般就近修饰名词,找到which修饰的内容很重要。

 

可是,书里的说法是“place noun and its modifier as close together as possible”,是“尽可能靠近”,不是“必须靠近”?


  • 所以,问题4.2:什么是跳跃指代?


讲语法怎么能没例句:

1. I took pictures of my dog, which is only 6-month years old.

2. I took pictures of my dog, which are so adorable that they make everyone smile.


第一个例句就是我们刚刚讨论的“就近修饰”,拆解后半句就是: my dog is only 6-month years old。


但是第二个例句就是现在要谈的跳跃指代,which并没有就近修饰“my dog”,而是修饰“pictures”,拆解开来就是:pictures are so adorable that they make everyone smile。

 

为什么可以这样?这就要深刻理解“as close together as possible”:


第一,“I took pictures of my dog”,现在要再加一个“picture”的修饰,怎么办?


最没歧义的方式是:I took pictures, which are so adorable…, of my dog;可是,这样写也太愚蠢了吧?


事实上,“of my dog” 和“which are so adorable…” 都是pictures的修饰,总得有一前一后。of my dog放后面太愚蠢了,因此就放前面咯。

 

第二,即便上句写成:I took pictures of my dog, which are so adorable… 有没有歧义?


单看“which”的确会误以为修饰dog,但“which are”说明修饰的是复数名词,因此不可能修饰单数名词dog,只能修饰pictures,没有歧义。

 

总结:as close together as possible的言外之意是跳跃指代,而跳跃指代的前提是没有歧义。

 

  • 问题4.3:通过OG的例题,加深印象。


OG18分册第241题:就近修饰



明白句子的本意:colder and wetterthan …修饰weather,而这样糟糕的weather导致了slow sales….


因此答案是B,看看OG的解释:

A. The insertion of was is unnecessary and misleading. The referent of which is unclear because regions, not weather.

B. Correct. This sentence is concise, correct, and idiomatic, and which has a clear referent,  the weather.


OG18第721题:跳跃指代



选项A:the remainder of the increase/ drug spending came from sales


which到底指代什么呢?指代不明,所以错了(准确来说修饰成分应该为the increase)


因此,体会一下为什么选项split出现了:which ~ the increase ~ it,很明显这就是考点


总结:当一个noun存在两个noun modifier的时候,必然出现跳跃指代;只要指代没有歧义,就没有问题。

 

  • 可是,问题5:什么情况下没有歧义呢?


第一,一个noun,两个noun modifier,从后往前看,语意判断,比如:

The old building in Beijing, which was built thousands of years ago, is now a historic landmark.


的确which可以修饰Beijing,但利用反证法从后往前看:which从句语意上不可能修饰Beijing,因此只能修饰building,语意上不存在歧义。

 

同理:The old building in Beijing, which is the capital of China, is now a historic landmark.


which可以就近修饰Beijing,也可以跳跃修饰building。但“可以跳跃修饰”不等于“必须跳跃修饰”,可以跳跃,也可以不跳跃。这里which是就近修饰Beijing,不跳跃。

 

总结:

1. noun + prep phrase + which/that的结构,可以跳跃,也可以不跳。

2.关键在于which/that从句本身语意是什么。

 

第二,主谓一致情况。比如问题4中例句,“which are”只能修饰复数名词,因此只能修饰pictures。

 

第三,倒装情况+动词,比如:


A new manager has been hired who will transform the company by decentralizing authority to various division heads while increasing their accountability through the use of public score cards.


倒装,避免头重脚轻:原句语序应该是A new CEO who will transform…has hired,但真这么写,这句子就没法看了。


动词:如果句子是A new managerhas hired by Jackie who will transform…这就有歧义了,幸亏原句who前面是动词hired,没法就近。

 

总结:只要没歧义,跳跃修饰主语也无妨。


第四,插入语+that。首先注意逗号不会和that连用,比如:


1. This possibility has been obscured by the recent sociological fashion, that emphasizes…

2. This possibility has been obscured by the recent sociological fashion that emphasizes…

第1句明显很奇怪,从未见过。

 

因此来看阅读中例句:


This possibility has been obscured by the recent sociological fashion, exemplified by B’s analysis, that emphasizes the way machinery reflects social choices.


因此这里的“that emphasizes the way…”不可能修饰analysis。


如果我们直接把双逗号插入语砍掉,句子就清爽了:

This possibility has been obscured by the recent sociological fashion that emphasizes the way machinery reflects social choices.

 

不过这里如果不是that,而是which,和问题4.3中OG18分册第241题一样了。

 

总结:插入语+that,直接删掉插入语。

 

第五,平行连接两个noun modifier,比如Manhattan例句:


The term “tincture” refers to a color emblazoned on a coat of arms and labeled with a special French word.


只要是noun modifier,就都存在跳跃指代的情况;我们专门挑which/that的定语从句来讲,不代表纯种V-ing / V-ed的修饰就不算。


上述例句又是“一个noun,两个noun modifier”的情况,只不过这次换用平行的方式了,所以应该好懂:labeled with跳跃修饰a color。

 

总结:一个noun,两个noun modifier,必定出现跳跃指代。


问题6:如何处理跳跃指代?


我们已经隐隐约约谈到“如何处理”这个问题了,就是长难句训练营所说的“拆解”!步骤如下:


拆解第一步,以which/that为marker,把句子拆成两半。

拆解第二步,从后往前看,通过语意判断,替换which/that。

 

结合长难句训练营,我提供一些例句供大家参考:


First, the focus on positional rank does not recognize the variation in length of service that may exist in top executive posts.

 

拆解第一步,两句话:

1. The focus does not recognize the variation.

2. That may exist in top executive posts.


拆解第二步,通过语意,替换that:

2.1 Service may exist in top executive posts.

2.2 Length of service may exist in top executive posts.

2.3 Variation may exist in top executive posts.


2.3应该更说的过去→跳跃指代。


Responding to these limitations, Bergh conducted a study of executive retention and acquisition outcome that focused on the organizational tenure.

 

拆解第一步,两句话:

1. Bergh conducted a study of executive retention and acquisition outcome.

2. That focused on the organizational tenure.


拆解第二步,通过语意,替换that,这里that有多种替换可能:

2.1 Acquisition outcome focused on the organizational tenure.

2.2 Executive retention focused on the organizational tenure.

2.3 A study focused on the organizational tenure.


哪个语意最正确?2.3是对的→跳跃指代

 

不论在SC还是RC,which修饰都是重点。判断真正修饰的对象,就是进阶高分的必经之路,你准备好开始训练了吗?


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