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【Voice of Gedu】8月13日 雅思写作真题高分解析

2016-08-16 烤鸭部落
Nick Yang【主讲科目】雅思口语、写作

【简 介】教学风格擅于将学生喜欢的素材做成即兴演讲而得名“口语魔法师”。长期致力于研究雅思口语题型转变,突破技巧,自创“角度搜索法”与“进阶互动法”来 攻克雅思实战的每一个部分,尤其针对考生对于口语考试普遍出现的“无思路”“无语料”“无逻辑”“无亮点”的“四无特点”有非常有效的培训方式。

【经历】澳大利亚西悉尼大学翻译学硕士学位,澳大利亚注册翻译师。原北京环球雅思口语名师。曾出版《雅思口语速背360》等书籍。


嗨,各位好,今天Nick来给大家回顾一下2016年8月13日的写作考题。首先来看题:
Some people think university and college education is necessary for career success. Some others believe people should get job as soon as possible and this is the key to the career success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
必须得说最近雅思考试的题目貌似应该是见底了,连着几个星期全部都是老题。但不用担心,过几天到了9月换题季的时候我们又可以看到一些新鲜血液。
这道题目的解题思路在于是不是能很快的找到Opinion,也就是比较大学教育和直接就业对于工作上成就的影响,那么我们大笔一挥,有了如下的思路图:
Opinion: it depends!For those who are talented in conducting researches and studying projects*university is essentialFor those who are good at socializing and short on money* to be employed
既然已经确定了上大学和直接找工作对于不同的人有相应的帮助,那说明我们没有否认任何一方,Nick最喜欢这样皆大欢喜的论证咯。接下来的时候我们对两个题目给出的观点做讨论。由于时间的关系,Nick之给出一段的论证,其它段落各位可以试着来自己写一写哦:
University education 论点句:The knowledge and social network resources gained through years of university education would guarantee the path of career success.
论证部分之一:It is a fact that a person cannot be fully appreciated or recognized without others’ recommendation.Luckily, knowing more people in the university could highly raise the possibility of it because those who received higher education can see others’ advantages more easily and also they might need someone like them to build up career together.论证部分之二:Likewise, considering the potential development of employees and company itself, a mature enterprise would prefer hiring people with advanced knowledge and skills to otherwise. 
今天的环雅好声音就到这里,咱们下周见!



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