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超实用:英文Email应该这样写更有温度!

南佛Joy 南佛罗里达校园资讯
2024-10-04



刚出国的小伙伴一定避免不了要写各种英文邮件进行交流。不论是要和教授同学交流作业,还是要和老板同事探讨工作内容都会进行频繁的邮件沟通






有时候真的很苦恼到底怎么才能写出一封得体的邮件呢?如何能既能提出自己的要求又显得有礼貌呢?



No.1

 Subject line 标题



给邮件一个简单、明确、具体的标题是非常重要的,让对方看一眼标题就知道这篇邮件大概要说什么。


EX:


如果你即将毕业,需要发给advisor询问毕业课程或者学分等等。这时候的标题可以写:Graduation check


No.2

Salutation 称谓


  • 头衔/职位:

    Dear Prof.(教授)/Dr.(博士)+ 姓

    (要记得greeting后面的标点符号是逗号, 然后空一行之后才正式开始信的内容。)


  • 跟对方邮件来往较多

    Hi XX或者Hello XX(收件人的First Name)


  • 第一次和对方联系,或者不熟悉

    “Dear+姓” 比如Dear Mr. Green, Mrs. Green


  • 如果不知道对方(女性)是否已婚,用“Ms.”


  • 如果不知道对方姓氏或性别,使用“Dear Sir/Madam ”



Greeting 问候语


一般在正文开始之前,写几句问候语无疑是最稳妥的选择,增加一些亲切感。

EX:


How are you? 你好吗?How is the project going? 项目进行顺利吗?



No.3

 Main point 正文


最重要的是简化句子去表达意思,不要用复杂的长单词或是技术术语使邮件内容累赘冗长。保证句子是清楚易懂的就没有问题。



询问信息

  • I am writing to inquire about…

  • Could you give me some information about...?

  • I would like to know ...

  • I’m interested in receiving/finding out ...


提出要求


  • I’d be grateful if you could ...

  • I wonder if you could ...

  • Do you think I could have ...?

  • Thank you in advance for your help in this matter.


添加附件

  • Please find attached the file (we discussed/you requested, etc.).

  • I’m sending you ... as a pdf file.


作出承诺

  • I’ll investigate the matter.

  • I will contact you again shortly.


提供帮助

  • Would you like me to ...?

  • If you wish, I would be happy to ...

  • Let me know whether you would like me to ...


No.4

Closing 结尾 


最后一部分通常会表示感谢或解释下一步是什么。


  • If you have any further questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact me.


  • Thank you for your time and consideration.


  • I look forward to hearing from you.

  • Please contact me if you have any question.


落款 signature


  • Sincerely, Yours Sincerely

  • Regards, Best Regards

  • Yours,  Yours Truly, Truly

  • Best, Best Wishes



Applying for a position 找工作




这个来给大家举一个工作申请的邮件例子。注:具体还是要看招聘信息的要求。


1. 称呼和问候


Dear + HR姓


2. 陈述理由


With reference to your job post on the ... website, I am interested in applying for the position of...


3. 自我介绍


  • I am currently studying for a ... degree in ... at ... University.


  • For the last ... months I have been working as a ... at ... 


4. 关于职位 (简单的说一两句你为什么对这个工作感兴趣和你曾经相关的经历)


  • I am interested in this position because ...

  • I feel I would be well-suited for this position because I have a lot of experience in ... 


5. 添加简历


  • The attachment below is my CV / Resume / Cover Letter. (看招聘网站的要求,上传相应的内容。)


  • I have attached my CV / Resume / Cover Letter as a PDF document.


6. 结束语和结尾问候


  • I would be grateful if you would consider my application.

  • I am available for interview in .../ by phone any weekday afternoon, and you can email me or telephone me on the number below.

  • I look forward to hearing from you soon.

  • Yours faithfully (通常用于无具体人名抬头Dear Sir/Madam的信件结尾)

  • Yours sincerely(通常用于有具体人名抬头Dear Mr. James/Dear Ms. Jasmin 的信件结尾)


Sources:


https://www.zhihu.com/question/20870189 


https://www.dealmoon.com/guide/763029 


http://www.sohu.com/a/212958360_750991 


http://zs.pxto.com.cn/news/bwdt/968563.html 




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