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2017-09-12 涨知识 👉 瑞鑫艾斯英语


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英语作文最能体现英语综合能力。想要写一篇好的英语作文是需要我们动些脑筋的。今天,小艾老师主要从句式上来分析怎样才能写就一篇优秀的英语作文!在写作中,反复运用这些句型,就可孰能生巧了!


一. 开头


句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。


〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.


〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.


〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.


〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.


二. 经过


1. 在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等。


①强调句。如:


〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday.


〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.


It was yesterday that I met him in the street.


②由with或without引导的短语。如:


He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.


③分词短语。如:


Satisfied with the result,he decided to go on with a new experiment.


④倒装句。如:


Only in this way can we achieve our goal.


Never before have I seen such a wonderful film.


Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent(正派的,得体的)person.


⑤省略句。如:


If so,victory will be ours.


You can make some changes wherever necessary.


2. 通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。


〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.


〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.


〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.


〔修正〕After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.


注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句或只用长句。


3. 学会使用过渡词。如:


①表递进关系:then(然后), besides(还有), furthermore(而且), moreover(此外)等。


②表转折关系:however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反), after all(毕竟)等。


③表总结关系:finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之), in conclusion(最后)等。


④表示强调:indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。


⑤表示对比:in the same way(同样地), just as(正如), on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。


相似的比较: similarly, in the same manner 


相反的比较: on the other hand, conversely(相反地), whereas(然而), while(然而), instead(相反), nevertheless(然而), in contrast(相反), on the contrary(相反), compared with…(和......相比之下)


4. 注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:


〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.


〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.


5. 避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:


〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.


〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.


I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.


三. 结尾


1. All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that…


All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious(和谐的)society.


2. Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that…

draw a conclusion:得出结论


3. As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.


4. From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that…


5. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners(礼貌)arise from politeness and respect for others.

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