20181215&16托福写作真题解析
2018.12.15
独立写作考题：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For success in school and work, the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge of a job or in a field of study. （重复2012年考题）
题目分析
题中目的词信息：to succeed in school and work
比较的两种能力：
A: to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance
B: to have excellent knowledge of a job or in a field of study
对于该题，一定要注意，题目中存在背景目的信息，这也是独立写作中容易导致“部分跑题”的信息——因为很多学生只是在纯粹的比较两种能力，以及给出两种能力的优势，但是最终没有提及题目中的背景目的信息，所以要注意。
关于题目中出现背景目的信息，如何防止跑题，我们可以先看一个类似的题目：
When you do some tasks that need creativity, do you prefer to work with others or do them by yourselves?
该题最主干的比较信息是work with others和work alone
各位可以分别先思考一下它俩的benefits
work alone的优点如下：
1）Working alone enables people to save a lot more time than they would when working with others.
2）Working alone gives people complete control over their work and enables them to enact their own ideas.
work with others的优点如下：
1）More ideas can be sparked off when we choose to work with others, which can help to improve the quality of one task to some extent
2）Working with others can help to improve the working efficiency and effectiveness
针对该题，虽然主要比较的是work with others和work alone，很多学生会忽略了题干中的一个背景信息do some tasks that need creativity，所以在展开文章的过程中，必须结合该背景信息进行展开讨论，如果没有提及该背景信息，那么，作文就会出现“部分跑题”，一旦出现跑题，独立写作的分数会很低，所以一定要注意。
针对该题，理由解释展开内容如下：
1）When we choose to work with others, it is inevitable for us to communicate or share ideas with each other; afterwards, through reasonably weighing merits and demerits of our ideas, our mind can be refreshed, horizon can be broadened and imagination can also be sparked off, which enable us to collect the best ones and then ensure the creativity of the task.
2）If we opt for working with others, the whole task will be allocated to each of us and the effectiveness and efficiency can be better ensured, which means that the time required for finishing the task can be reduced, and therefore, the rest time can be spared for us to collect more relevant materials or information from different platforms like books, the internet and so on; accordingly, the creativity of the task can be enhanced to some extent.
通过上述题目的展开思路，针对2018.12.15的考题，我们先从两种能力中进行选择，然后针对所选项、思考相关理由，在理由展开中，最后一定要推到背景目的信息：
On the one hand, the ability to adapt or adjust to a changing condition or circumstance can ensure us more opportunities in such a fiercely competitive environment. 具备该能力，当遇到变化的时候，必然能够针对变化做出相应的具体分析，然后更快的进行自我调整和补充提升，自然可以能够更大可能的获得机会，机会更多，成功的概率更大
On the other, we can better apply what we have learnt into practice if we have the ability to adapt or adjust ourselves to a challenging condition or circumstance.
一旦具备该能力，当遇到变化的时候，必然能够更快的发现不同情形下的特征，针对特征，才能够将自己所学的内容更好的具体运用，准确运用自己所学知识，减少学习和工作中的失误，才能更大可能的确保成功
2018.12.16
独立写作考题：
Some teachers prefer to record the lecture in advance so that students can familiarize first, and students will practice what they have learnt from the lecture in the class (including discussions, Q and A etc.). Is this an effective way?
该题属于教育类话题，并且是一道教育类新题，值得关注
题目解析：
有些老师会将课程提前路程视频，学生通过视频，能够提前熟悉，然后在课堂上直接讨论提问并加以解答。是否认为该方法有效？
考题分析
本题突破口为题目中的“effective”，何为有效？其实针对“effective”，可以从两个方向讨论：
1）节约时间
2）更多的成果
节约时间角度：
通过提前录制好的课程视频，对课程提前熟悉，自然可以让学生提前扫盲，发现自己真正的问题，然后在课堂上，老师可以对于学生们的问题进行总结归纳，集中针对问题进行具体的讨论分析解答并且不用浪费时间在大家所知道或者已经掌握的内容上，自然可以让学生在限定时间内容获得更多的知识
By pre-recording the course videos and enabling students to familiarize them with the course in advance, it is natural for the students to discover their own real problems in advance. Then in class, the teacher can summarize and focus on the problems, ensuring the specific discussion and analysis and not wasting time on what everyone knows or has mastered, and thus, students are bound to gain more knowledge in limited time.
更多成果角度：
通过提前录制好的课程视频，对课程提前熟悉，培养了学生自主学习的能力，并且在课堂上，老师针对问题，进行讨论分析解答，学生们可以相互讨论，相互合作，并且也可以跟老师进行具体讨论，可以让学生培养合作，批判思考等能力，所以，这样做可以让学生除了可以获得相应的知识，还能够更好的培养相关的学习能力
Through the pre-recorded course videos, students need to learn by themselves in advance for the purpose of familiarizing them with the course, helping to cultivate the students' ability to learn independently. In addition, in class, through discussions and analysis among students and the teacher, students can cooperate with each other or with the teacher, enabling students to develop cooperation, critical thinking and other abilities, so students can better develop relevant learning abilities in addition to the academic knowledge.
关于effective的题目今年也出现过几次，分析思路很像，都是可以通过effective进行突破，找到相关理由以及相应的展开话术；比如：
When doing group projects, some people are allowed to choose anyone they wish for; others are allowed to choose those who think differently from them. Which do you think is more effective?
针对这个题目，我们应该仔细读题，理清两种类型人的特点，然后结合特点再思考理由，并且，一定要注意，在思考的时候不要忘记题目中的最终目的：more effective
针对“effective”，可以从两个方向讨论：
1）节约时间
2）限定时间内，可以取得更多的成果
所以，理由如下：
1）小组任务，会分成很多不同的部分，想法不同的人根据自身特点，选择最适合的部分，然后针对性的完成，自然会节约时间，确保effective
2）一个人的想法必然有限，不同想法的人会提供不同的见解，集思广益后，可以确保小组 任务取得最佳成果，自然也是effective的一种体现
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