【读写微技能】写好长句的技巧(配课件下载)
掌握读写微技能，提高语言综合运用能力，对英语学习和高考答题来说，都是非常重要的。
|| 写好长句的技巧||
经典例题
用一句话表达下列信息点。
姓名：李明
职务：班长
外貌特征：个子高
性格特点：很活跃
在介绍人物的身份、外貌和性格特征等时可用以下方法：
方法1：同位语
Li Ming, (who is) a tall, healthy and active boy, is our monitor.
Li Ming, monitor of our class, is tall, healthy and active.
方法2：定语从句
Li Ming, who is tall, healthy and active, is our monitor.
方法3：with介词短语表示伴随状况
Li Ming, our monitor, is a student with a strong body and an active mind.
即学即用
1.用一个句子介绍以下人物。(三种表达)
姓名：陈燮霞；职业：女子举重运动员；身高：150cm；体重：47.5kg；出生日期：1983年1月8日；出生地点：广东省广州市。
方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语)
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方法2：过去分词短语开头；with介词短语
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方法3：as介词短语
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2.用一个句子介绍以下地点。(三种表达)
古迹名称：云冈石窟；地点位置：山西省大同市；始建时间：北魏时期；评价：举世闻名的艺术瑰宝。
方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语)
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方法2：过去分词短语开头
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方法3：as介词短语
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3.用一个句子介绍以下节日。(三种表达)
名称：清明节；性质：中国传统节日；目的：纪念祖先；日期：每年四月五日前后。
方法1：同位语+定语(定语从句或短语)
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方法2：过去分词短语开头
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方法3：as介词短语
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4.分析信息点之间的逻辑关系，请分别用一个句子表达以下各组信息。
(1)(陈燮霞)2007年首次参加世界锦标赛，夺得女子48公斤级三项冠军。(时间)
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(2)随着经济的发展，更多家庭拥有私家车，这造成严重的交通问题和环境污染。(伴随或结果)
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(3)这项活动得到全国人民的支持, 取得了巨大成功。(结果)
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(4)倡议人们放弃使用私家车，选用公共汽车、自行车或步行方式。（对比）
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(5)尽管工作繁忙，人们在清明节还是会带些花扫墓祭祖。(转折)
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(6)(话题：青少年参加电视才艺表演)赞同：①丰富社会经验。②增强自信。(结果)
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(7)(话题：青少年参加电视才艺表演)不赞同：模仿多，创新少。(对比)
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【答案】（上下滑动查看）
1.
方法1 Chen Xiexia, a female weight-lifter who was born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, is 150cm tall and weighs 47.5 kg.
方法2 Born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, Chen Xiexia is a female weight-lifter with a height of 150 cm and a weight of 47.5 kg.
方法3 As a famous weight-lifter in China, Chen Xiexia was born on January 8th, 1983 in Guangzhou City, Guangdong Province, and is 150 cm in height and 47.5 kg in weight.
2.
方法1 The Yungang Caves, one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world built in the Northern Wei Dynasty, are located in Datong, Shanxi Province.
方法2 Located in Datong, Shanxi Province，the Yungang Caves date from the Northern Wei Dynasty and is regarded as one of the most valuable cultural relics in the world.
方法3 As a world-famous cultural relic, the Yungang Caves which are located in Datong, Shanxi Province，can date back to the Northern Wei Dynasty.
3.
方法1 Qingming Festival, a traditional festival (which is) in honour of our ancestors, falls on April 4th or 5th every year.
方法2 Regarded as one of the most important Chinese traditional festivals, Qingming Festival takes place on somewhere around April 5th every year.
方法3 As a traditional festival (which is) in honour of our ancestors, Qingming Festival falls on April 4th or 5th every year.
4.
（1）When taking part in the World Championship for the first time, she won a total of three championships for the women’s 48 kg class weight-lifting competition.
（2）With the development of the economy, an increasing number of families have bought private cars, thus leading to serious air traffic problems and more serious air pollution.
（3）The campaign has gained much support all over the country, which makes it a real success.
（4） People are encouraged to take public transport，ride bicycles or walk instead of driving private cars.
（5）Despite the fact that people are busy working, they will clean their ancestors’ graves and decorate them with some flowers.
（6）Some think that it is a stage to show their talents for art, contributing much to their social experience and self-confidence.
（7）However, other students hold the different idea that the teenagers are just imitating others rather than showing something original.
结语：
每次写作的内容下次再现的可能性不大，但同类的内容以及同样的逻辑却篇篇皆有，找到这个共性，进行针对性的归纳整理，那么，平时每一次的写作练习就不仅能帮助巩固我们前段时间的学习，还能促使我们进一步提高，拿下基础写作，则指日可待。
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