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If you believe the minimum wage should be a living wage… and no one working full time should have to raise their children in poverty…join us.
If you believe that every man, woman, and child in America has the right to affordable health care…join us.
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And yes, if you believe that your working mother, wife, sister, or daughter deserves equal pay… join us…
然而,需要提醒大家的是,运用重复时,必须考虑主题和内容的实际需要,不能为了追求形式而随意堆砌辞藻,即“为了重复而重复”。
Yes, those were actually Donald Trump's words in Cleveland. And they should set off alarm bells for all of us. Really? I alone can fix it? Isn't he forgetting troops on the front lines? Police officers and firefighters who run toward danger? Doctors and nurses who care for us? Teachers who change lives? Entrepreneurs who see possibilities in every problem? Mothers who lost children to violence and are building a movement to keep other kids safe? (请注意这段同时运用了排比)
He's forgetting every last one of us. Americans don't say "I alone can fix it." We say "We'll fix it together."
观众听到这里哈哈一笑,使用这样一个小幽默,希拉里既活跃了现场气氛,也保证了 everyone is on the same page。
(41:20) Well, let's take a closer look, shall we? In Atlantic City, 60 miles from here, you will find contractors and small businesses who lost everything because Donald Trump refused to pay his bills. Now remember what the President said last night—don't boo, vote.
她讲述了她的祖父在纺纱坊工作了五十年,也正因为如此她父亲才有了进入大学念书的机会,才得以在二战结束后经营起了自己的生意。而她母亲则在小时候被抛弃,不得已小小年纪便以做女佣谋生。这分明就是凄惨故事会啊有木有!正是这些故事,使希拉里拆解了自己被塑造多年的高高在上的律师、第一夫人、纽约州参议员、国务卿的这些形象,试图告诉她的支持者她也和大家一样,来自一个普通家庭,也正因此她才深知“没人能独自度过一生”,并以此博得选民的好感。
除此之外,希拉里在演讲中大量运用We,Let's这种主语,让听众感到:
(23:54) Because it's not just a detail if it's your kid, if it's your family. It's a big deal. And it should be a big deal to your president, too.
(56:49) Let's look to the future with courage and confidence. Let's build a better tomorrow for our beloved children and our beloved country. And when we do, America will be greater than ever.
希拉里在描述个人家庭经历之后得出了一个结论,那便是——没有人可以只靠自己成功(“No one gets through life alone. We have to look out for each other and lift each other up.”),她在演讲中阐述的问题与普通群众息息相关,是当下真实的美国正面临的无数亟待解决的问题,是每个选民都在关注的自己的切身利益。希拉里的演讲恰恰描述了她将如何从好的方面影响到每个人的生活,解决这些问题,“Stronger”和“Together”这两个关键词贯穿了全篇演讲:
(26:39) For all those who vote for me and for those who don't. For all Americans together!
(54:20) Every generation of Americans has come together to make our country freer, fairer, and stronger. None of us ever have or can do it alone.
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演讲全文:http://www.latimes.com/politics/la-na-pol-hillary-clinton-convention-speech-transcript-20160728-snap-htmlstory.html
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