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【干货】雅思写作广告传媒类话题解析,附实用观点表述

烤鸭部落 2021-11-20

环球名师:Nicole Mu

雅思词汇语法教辅课程主讲,本科毕业于加拿大Western University金融专业,获得专业英语教学教育学硕士。多年加拿大本地教学经验,主攻第二语言学习,对于雅思备考和英语学习有自己独到的见解,教学方法化繁为简,上课风格幽默轻松风趣,善于与学生沟通交流,从而激发学生学习热情。独特的“新媒体教学方法”,结合网络媒介配合教学以及作业辅导,高效率提高学生英语语言基础。

最近老有烤鸭宝宝跟Nicole老师说,觉得传媒类的文章最难,所以啊今天Nicole就做一回活雷锋,给大家手把手举个栗子~

我们先看一下例题Nowadays a large amount of advertising aiming at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

这个题目说的是由于负面的影响,当前大量针对儿童的广告应该被禁止。你同意或者不同意?属于明显的问观点的题目,讨论的是媒体广告(Media & Advertisement)类话题。

接下啦就要分析啦,(Nicole老师敲黑板):媒体类话题一直是雅思写作考试中的重点,此题关注儿童这一受众对象,所以,要从儿童心理和身体发展上考虑广告对他们的负面影响。正面可以从广告对所有人的好处来说,比如信息作用和教育作用。最后要说广告应该被合理地监管,而不是一味地禁止。到这,各位烤鸭宝宝们需要对于这道作文题目的主要观点和解题思路就串联起来了。


文章结构可以这样:

分段:4段

首段:描述话题,表明文章内容和个人观点。

主体段1:广告对儿童的坏处。

主体段2:广告对所有人群的好处。

结尾段:总结上文,给出自己的看法。

你需要的词汇

1. numerous adj.大量的

2. be exposed to 接触

3. overwhelming  adj.压倒性的

4. supervise  v.监管

5. concede  v. 承认

6. cognitive adj.认知的

7. headstrong  adj. 任性的

8. detrimental  adj. 有害的

9. inappropriate  adj. 不合适的

10. overstate v. 夸张

11. intriguing  adj. 引人入胜的

12. conspicuous adj.明显的

13. symbiotically adv. 同时地

14. ethics n.伦理道德

15. implements v. 实施

高分观点句表述

 

1. 首先,小孩的认知发展达不到独立决策的程度。因此,他们会很容易受到广告的影响,以至于很任性的购物,这对他们的心智发展是有害的。

For one thing, the cognitive development of children is not adequate so as to make independent decisions. Additionally, they tend to be easily affected by such advertising. Hence, they will form a habit of headstrong purchasing, which is detrimental to their mental progression.

 

2.并且,大多数青少年缺乏重要的辨别能力和自律性,因此,他们会和同龄人进行攀比,久而久之会给父母带来不必要的负担。 

In addition, most teenagers evidently lack the essential distinguishing capability as well as self-discipline. Consequently, their greediness might drive them to compare with other peers for their possessions and overburden their parents financially.

 

3.一些广告可以促进商业发展,它们制作精良,投资巨大,能够很好地展示相关产品和服务。

Some are beneficial to promoting business, for they are very intriguing, and they invest in a large amount of capital and creative perspectives to present the very products or services.

 

4.并且,一些社会公益广告可以提升大众意识,这便是广告的教育作用。年轻人也可以从中学习好的价值观和社会道德。

Besides, some commercials regarding public interest aspects will enhance the general conscience, which is the educational function of advertisements and allows the young to learn some proper value and social ethics.

同类应用题目


1. Advertising aimed at children is increasing. Some people think this has negative effects and should be controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


2. People are surrounded by many kinds of advertising, which can influence their life. Does the positive effect of this trend outweigh negative effect? 

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