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【干货】灵魂画师Nick教大家如何利用口语Part 2的60秒!- 地点篇

Nick Yang 烤鸭部落 2021-11-20

环球讲师 · Nick Yang

雅思口语写作双料名师,7年雅思一线教学,极度丰富的雅思实战经验。口语教学擅长短时间内提高学生即兴演讲,其中“培养皿练习法”与“焰火法则”更是有效帮助广大考生在有效时间内应对海量题目,彻底根治考生“无思路”“无语料”“无亮点”的窘况。写作教学风格以洞悉考官阅卷习惯及塑造逻辑连贯而著名,不仅在教学资料上掌握北美最全面的写作真题题库,并在执教中有每节课当场10分钟完成一篇至少7分范文的惊艳展示。

上一次Nick老师发了一篇灵魂画师的作品之后,很多迷妹和迷弟纷纷表示Nick在画画方面天(shen)赋(me)异(wan)禀(yi)。但做人不能太骄傲,所以我们继续地点篇!

再次很负责任的讲,雅思口语考试Part 2这60秒是你唯一可以用来组建丰满内容的时间。

你只需要三样东西:

1,幼儿园水平绘画技巧

2,看懂题目的英语水平

3,放飞自我的心


全部check以后,我们开始创作!来看题:

2017年9月9日多伦多雅思口语考题:

Describe a building where many people like to visit

you need to say

where is it

how does this building look like

why many people want to visit there

第一步:这个房子叫“鬼屋”

在这一步中,我们需要给这个房子一个背景时代,比如说中世纪,十九世纪,或什么重要历史事件的背景,如一战二战,工业革命等等时间点。


那么有了时间,接下来就是说明一下房子的模样。按照简单的构造来说,再加一些里面的内饰就可以了。

比如我们可以说:

This place is called ‘Haunted House’ and it is located in the country side of my hometown. The house was built around World War 2 so that the whole style and design is quite old and obsolete. I heard that there are still many photos and pictures about the war inside of the house itself.

第二步:房子的主人

从图上可以看出来,这个房子是一个当地有钱人的大宅子,房主有三个败家儿子,所以顺理成章就将房子作为遗产传递了下去。

至于这个房主是谁,你大可以编造一个头衔,什么当地的大官啊,地主啊或者是大富商啊,再不济了就是什么和当时的皇帝是亲戚啊之类的。

所以我们继续说:


About this house, I need to mention its owner. He was very famous at that time because, according to the legend, he was a member of the royal family and he also made to be the richest person in the whole city by doing business. I bet there were countless treasures and jewelries in that house before.


This owner had three sons and he decided to give this house and all the valuable belongings to the sons as legacy.

第三步:房子里的恩怨情仇

接下来咱就来点劲爆的!先是房子里上演了一出子嗣之间争夺房产的大戏,直接导致其中有两名继承人毙命。至于死亡的原因众说纷纭,但跟重要的是自打这一家出了这副惨剧之后,房子就总是穿出一些“奇怪”的传闻。

好了,我们可以继续说了:


However, the three sons did not become closer after having the heritage. Instead of that, they even started to harm each other for taking the house as a whole! Based on the story, one of them killed the other two but the killing method is still left unknown.


After that, the weird stories began to occur to this house. Many people claim that they heard or saw something flashing in the houses. They all guessed the ghosts could be the two brothers got killed.

第四步:鬼屋摇身一变成景区

好吧,我知道这个故事有点狗血,但从合理的角度来讲,到了这个文明科学的时代,大家更愿意去做一件事情,那就是赚钱!

那么这么好的一个故事再加上现代人这么猎奇的心理,当地的开发商干脆就把它包装了一下,变成了一个旅游景区,很多喜欢探险的年轻人都来这里参观并拍照留念。

最后,我们说:


Now, that house has become a tourism attraction. Some business groups bought that property from government and did some renovations in order to attract some tourists who are looking for a thrill.


I guess that is a good idea because the travelers nowadays all are searching for some exciting stories or adventures.


So, the haunted house in my hometown has made thousands of tourists come and visit and I believe the story I told you can be learned by more people.

好啦朋友们,

今天的灵魂画师Nick讲口语就到这里

我们下次见!

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