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【环雅讲师】Nicole Mu

【经历】雅思词汇语法教辅课程主讲，本科毕业于加拿大western university金融专业，获得专业英语教学教育学硕士。多年加拿大本地教学经验，主攻第二语言学习，对于雅思备考和英语学习有自己独到的见解，教学方法化繁为简，上课风格幽默轻松风趣，善于与学生沟通交流，从而激发学生学习热情。独特的“新媒体教学方法”，结合网络媒介配合教学以及作业辅导，高效率提高学生英语语言基础。

Hello~各位宝宝们，今天 Nicole 老师要跟大家一起膜拜一篇范文，注意了，咳咳,是膜拜。

好了，说正题，Nicole 老师选了一篇老外写的雅思作文，话题是关于政府投资互联网基础建设的话题。这篇文章在使用大量相对而言复杂的用词的同时，兼顾了文章的较有说服力的说理过程，没有丝毫的模板感觉。所以，是一篇有炫技感的高逼格文章。膜拜吧！！

Topic: In many countries, governments are spending a large amount of money on improving Internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

在许多国家,政府在花巨资升级互联网络。这种投入的原因是?这是政府财政最合理的使用领域?

    Recently, an ample amount of governmental investment money is being poured into the amelioration of the Internet supply. This phenomenon has its root from a host of factors, and I would discuss that there are various available ways to allocate this money more effectively.

    To begin with, it is understandable why enhancing the quality of the Internet provision has become a key national investment portfolio. Firstly, with the availability of a better Internet connection, an extensive avenue of information is opened up for the inhabitants. Most residents would have omnipresent access to both international and local social news, and it has never been easier for those who live in remote areas to reach a wide range of information at a click of a button. Secondly, an improved Internet supply can facilitate the operation process of governmental companies. With stably functioning online platforms, corporations today would no longer find it difficult to approach their customers, manage their employees or organize videoconferences, which boosts the overall productivity. In the long run, the development of such firms makes great contribution to the thriving of the national economy.

    However, I believe that upgrading the Internet access is not the best way to allocate the government money. The primary reason is that the broadband connection in most countries today is fast enough to satisfy the basic demands of the public. For example, in China, hardly do individuals have to wait a long time for a web page to load, while online business meetings have even become popular years ago. Therefore, an improvement in the quality of the Internet supply can be deemed not obligatory and urgent. Another justification is that there are several other fields, which are being placed under strain and require the capital disbursement to function. To illustrate, a number of state hospitals in the UK have been conducting research on a complete cure for cancer, and it seems that this should be the investment priority.

    In final words, all aforementioned standpoints lead me to a concrete inference that it is reasonable of the authorities to spend money bettering the Internet provision, but there are ways to allocate the capital more appropriately.

前方高能

前方高能:(实在太多,稍稍举例)

an ample amount of 大量的 ample 丰富的 adj

be poured into 大量注入

amelioration =improvement 改善 n

investment portfolio 指一个投资活动的组合

have omnipresent access to 无所不在的网络通径

online platform 网络平台

at a click of a button 仅仅点击一下

make great contribution to 做出一个巨大的贡献

thriving 繁荣的;蒸蒸日上的

broadband connection 宽带连接

being placed under strain 面临压力

capital disbursement 支出

conduct research 进行研究

investment priority 投资的优先顺序

standpoints 立场,观点

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