【学术干货】雅思写作的“陷阱”，想拿高分就千万不要掉进去了

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Nicole Mu

雅思词汇语法教辅课程主讲，本科毕业于加拿大western university金融专业，获得专业英语教学教育学硕士。多年加拿大本地教学经验，主攻第二语言学习，对于雅思备考和英语学习有自己独到的见解，教学方法化繁为简，上课风格幽默轻松风趣，善于与学生沟通交流，从而激发学生学习热情。独特的“新媒体教学方法”，结合网络媒介配合教学以及作业辅导，高效率提高学生英语语言基础。

Hello～各位雅思宝宝们，好久不久哈。今天Nicole老师要跟大家聊一聊这个雅思写作中会出现的“陷阱”各位宝宝小心不要掉进去!

• Topic 1

  People say that government should reduce the traffic congestion by building more trains and subways. Other people say they should build more roads and wider roads. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.

• Topic 2

  In some cities, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

分析：题目2讨论tax是好的还是不好的，这是一个open question, 我们只需要讨论利弊，但是1这个题目里面给了reason和result,  我们必须要解释为什么reason 可以导致result,也就是building more trains and subways怎么可以减少交通拥堵这个问题。

思路分析：接下来Nicole老师给大家一些key words帮助大家扩展一下思路

题目1——Reason 1: 

a: build trains and subways

b: provide citizens less time-consuming options

c: fewer residents drive cars

d: reduce the number of people driving cars

扩写：

Advocates of constructing more trains and subways would have following convincing reasons. To begin with, building trains and subways can effectively reduce the number of people driving cars. For example, it is the newly built subways in my hometown that have been providing citizens less time-consuming options. Consequently, this contributes to fewer residents driving private cars, reducing the traffic crowds on the roads. Without these lines, the traffic condition in my hometown would be affected.

题目2——reason 1: 

a: motivate drivers to take public transportation

b: reduce the number of vehicles on roads

c: reduce carbon dioxide emissions

d: alleviate air pollution

扩写: 

Charging congestion tax benefits the environment. For example, 5 years ago, in Singapore, it was the implementation of a congestion tax that motivated a significant number of residents to take public transportation. Consequently, carbon dioxide emissions were reduced, which alleviated air pollution and improved the air quality.

好啦，各位宝宝如果还有别的思路，欢迎大家奇思广议，我们一起来discuss啦

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