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【简介】英语考试类型培训口语写作双料名师，10年语培类一线教学，拥有极度丰富的实战经验。口语教学擅长短时间内提高学生即兴演讲，有效帮助广大考生在有效时间内应对海量题目，彻底根治考生“无思路”“无语料”“无亮点”的窘况。写作教学风格以洞悉考官阅卷习惯及塑造逻辑连贯而著名。
【经历】西悉尼大学中英翻译学硕士，国际翻译师资格。
We have found that retired people commonly do not feel happy about their retired lives.
What are the causes of this situation?
What solutions can we suggest to solve this problem?
| opening | background | 老年人的生活方式在很大程度上左右着这个社会的稳定，因为他们影响着自己的家庭和子女的生活方式。 |
| paraphrase | 所以，当我们发现越来越多的老年人对与自己的退休生活不满意的时候，很多人就开始了讨论和分析。 | |
| statement | 从我个人来看，这个现象可以从内部和外部两个方面去寻找原因，以及我们需要更多来自于政府和家庭的支持才能解决。 | |
| The stability of society is highly affected by the senior's lifestyle because they have a significant influence on their own families and children. Therefore, when we find that more and more old people cannot be satisfied with their retired life, it is necessary to analyze and discuss this phenomenon. From my perspective, the reasons that directly trigger this situation can be found from themselves and society. Meanwhile, we also need help from the government and family to tackle this problem | ||
| reason | topic sentence | 很多老年人本身对与工作的热情已经决定了他们在退休之后会经历一段时间的困惑和难过。 |
| fact | 众所周知，很多人在某些岗位上工作了一生并且得到了诸多的认可与奖励，而这是他们自豪的重要原因。 | |
| common sense | 然而，在退休之后，很多人没有办法接受自己已经不被需要的现实，而且需要被迫看到其他人来代替自己的位置，这将是一个不小的心理挑战。 | |
| topic sentence | 除此之外，现在社会也没有太多给老年人娱乐或休闲的设施与活动。 | |
| example | 以加拿大为例，经过调查发现，专门给老年人活动的室内运动场馆，电影院，音乐会或者俱乐部都是极其有限的，这直接导致了大量老年人在寻找娱乐活动时无处可去。 | |
| For most of the retired seniors, their enthusiasm for their work has already determined that they will experience a period of bewilderment and unhappiness. It is widely known that many people can obtain a large amount of satisfaction and rewards in their career achievements, which incites their sense of existence. However, many retired people cannot accept a result of not being needed in society and being forced to see others replace them, which is a difficult mental challenge. In addition to this, nowadays, society does not provide sufficient facilities and entertainment to the old. For example, according to the reports from Canada, old citizens have very limited resources of exercise court, cinema, concert or club, which directly triggers that a large number of old people do not have places for spare time. | ||
| solution | topic sentence | 在我看来，解决老年人退休生活不如意的最佳方法是运用政府的投资能力来改善他们的生活状况。 |
| responsible person | 政府，从常识上理解，是一个给人民提供生活便利和解决民众问题的机构，这也就意味着他们的职责范围内必然包括解决老年人的生活问题. 更重要的是他们有足够的资金去开设一些老年人相关的社会活动。 | |
| process of the plan | 具体来说，他们不仅可以投资一些老年人喜欢的俱乐部活动并且聘请护工和专业的指导来丰富退休后的生活，还可以利用一些资金去打造更好的社区活动项目，比如老年健身运动或电影音乐欣赏等等。 | |
| Based on my personal understanding, the solution for the dissatisfaction of an elder’s life is to use the power of the government money. The authority, from our common knowledge, is the institution for tackle citizen’s life issues and provide the convenience, which means that the retired are certainly involved in their service range. What’s more, government possesses adequate financial support to initiate a series of related activities. To be specific, they can invest in some club activities popular among the seniors and also hire some professional nursing staff to direct their lives. Meanwhile, the money also can be used to establish some community activities, such as fitness exercise, music or movie appreciation and etc. | ||
| Ending | 总而言之，老年人的生活问题不应该被忽视，而政府理应做专门的预算来改善他们的退休生活。 | |
| All in all, the life issue of the elderly should not be ignored and the government ought to make a special budget for their lives in order to modify their retirement plan. |
Some people say that the best way to decrease traffic and pollution is to increase the tax on petrol. Some others state that the merit outweighs the drawbacks.
Discussboth views and gives your opinion.
Owing to the news reports on a daily basis, the seriousness of the environmental problems has long been appreciated by the public. In order to solve these setbacks once for all, some people suggest to raise the oil tax, yet some others believe the drawbacks of this action might also be tremendous. By comparing, I personally believe that the demerit could take the bigger part.
As a predictable advantage brought by this action, there must be fewer cars on the road with a higher oil price. As common knowledge, it is not likely for people to purchase something beyond their affordability so that driving will become too money-consuming when the oil price reaches a certain level. Meanwhile, this situation will naturally bring smaller numbers of motor vehicles and related waste-gas emission and the air quality will be largely improved in urban regions.
On the other hand, the problem triggered by extra petrol tax could be severe. Firstly, discouraging car transportation basically equals to demoting the traffic efficiency and all the related business will definitely suffer from a huge retrogression. What’s even worse is that this tax-raising still cannot solve the environment problems radically. We all can admit that the environmental problem is a complicated issue caused by multiple factors, including water pollution, bio-chemical waste, deforestation etc. Therefore, if we only take waste gas under control, there are still many other pollution resources and those other pollutions will keep ruining our nature.
By analyzing both sides, we can easily see that our nature still cannot be saved effectively by simply raising the tax payment. On the other hand, life efficiency will even be more impaired.
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