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南医大小白老师 医学博士英语 2024-05-02

小白老师说:考试迫在眉睫,而你还在纠结作文不会写?考前背好这 20 个写作万能句,全面收复失地!也许这 20 个句子就足以挽救你的作文,甚至成功逆袭。



小白老师的20个考博英语写作万能句自2016年推出,广受考生好评,后来还收录到魔法书里。我在各种渠道收到非常多的积极反馈,大家都说考试的时候小白老师的万能句真的帮助很大。今天在之前基础上更新了一部分,并做精讲,保证大家看了就能懂,学了就能用。


首先请认真阅读万能句的用法说明,非常重要!


万能句用法说明


这 20 个句子是不是背下来就 OK 了?考试的时候肯定不可能考到完全一样的句子,那万能句背好了到底怎么用?下面小白老师给大家手把手示范一下。先来举个例子。


例一:

According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking.

根据最近的一项调查,每年有4, 000, 000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。


这是一个中英文对照的例句,在这个句子中,我们能提炼出这样一个句式 :

According to a recent survey, ________ people die each year from diseases linked to _________.

最近一项调查显示,每年有多少多少人死于和什么什么有关的疾病。


OK,你现在要做的,就是把这个句子背下来,然后考试的时候,只要涉及到“根据一项调查”、“有调查表明”、“有调查发现”,我们就可以把这个句子卖弄出来。横线上根据具体内容往上填就行了。


比如说,考试时候如果你想表达:“根据一项调查,中国每年有20万人死于和肥胖有关的疾病。”,那我们就可以从容地写道:

According to a recent survey, 200,000 people die each year from diseases linked to obesity in China.

这样的句子简洁、规范、漂亮,是不是比你自己吭哧半天才挤出来的句子强?


例二:

When it comes to a healthy diet,  nutritionists believe that the increasing consumption of vegetables and fruits can lower the risks of stroke and coronary heart disease.

说起健康饮食,营养学家认为多吃蔬菜水果可以降低中风和冠心病的发病危险。


句式提炼:

When it comes to _______,  _________ believe that _______ can lower the risks of _________.

要是说起某事,某人(或某个研究、某个调查)认为什么什么东西可以降低某种疾病的发病危险。


甚至提炼成:

When it comes to _________,  ________ believe that ____________.

要是说起某事,某人(或某个研究、某个调查)认为怎么怎么样。


但凡涉及要表达“医生认为……”、“专家认为……”、“有研究表明……”等概念的时候,多数考生都只会写" Doctors think that …", "A study shows that …",通篇 think 不断,给人感觉单调乏味,声嘶力竭。但是如果我们用上像When it comes to sth.,sb. believe that … 这样的表达,就非常的自然、地道。                         


考试的时候,nutritionists 还可以根据具体情况替换成 doctors、experts、scientists、 researchers等等。the increasing consumption of vegetables and fruits 可以替换成某种药物、医疗手段、生活方式等等。



好了,下面就是小白老师的 20 个万能句了。你需要做的是两步:

步骤一,句式提炼;

步骤二,背诵原句(中英文)。


在今天的精讲中,小白老师会帮大家把句式提炼出来,但是不建议大家直接背诵提炼出来的结构,而是要背诵原句,因为原句句子完整,能提示我们句子各部分应该是什么词性什么成分,考试时候作替换不容易出错。


好了,下面就是小白老师 20 个经典万能句的精讲版了,各位学霸拿走不谢。


万能句 1


Many experts point out that physical exercise contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.

许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。


句式提炼:

Many experts point out that               contributes directly to a person’s physical fitness.


小白老师说:一写到“…... 对…... 有好处”,大家好像只会用 be good to, 水平略高的会写 be beneficial to, 下次试试 contribute to 这样清新脱俗的短语,我们还可以加上 directly 这样的副词来使表达更精准。


万能句 2


No invention has received more praise and abuse than antibiotic.

没有一项发明像抗生素一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评。


句式提炼:

No invention has received more praise and abuse than                .


如果你要讲某个事情有利有弊,那这个句式真的非常好用,只需要往横线上填个关键词就行了。比如我们要写“基因编辑技术有好处,亦有弊端“,就可以套用这个万能句,写成:

No invention has received more praise and abuse than gene editing.

没有一项发明像基因编辑一样同时受到如此多的赞扬和批评,不就是基因编辑有利有弊嘛。

            

万能句 3


There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem and the authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:有关当局应该采取有力措施来解决它。


句式提炼:

There is no denying the fact that               is an extremely serious problem and the authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.


我把上面这样的句子称之为“实用的废话”,严重的问题当然要采取有力措施来解决啊。我来给大家示范一下怎么套用,比如我们要写:

“无可否认,医患纠纷是一个非常重要的问题,有关当局应该采取有力措施来解决。” 


套用上面的这个万能句,我们就可以写成:

There is no denying the fact that medical dispute is an extremely serious problem and the authorities should take strong measures to deal with it.

你看,背了这个万能句,只要把“医患纠纷” medical dispute 把这个词往横线上一填就行了。


万能句 4 


An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement.

一项调查显示妇女欢迎退休。


句式提炼:

An investigation shows that             tend to have a favorable attitude toward                                                             .

作文中写到某个人群对某事持欢迎的态度的时候,可以用这个句式。另外,我们还可以举一反三,如果要写某个人群对某事持反对态度,只需要把favorable 改成 unfavorable 就可以了,即:


An investigation shows that             tend to have an unfavorable attitude toward                       .


万能句 5


Any government, which is blind to this point, may pay a heavy price.

任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。


这是一句非常实用的废话,考试的时候遇到合适的作文主题,直接甩出来就可以了,一个词都不需要改。


注意:如果你想把 government 替换成某人,后面的 which 也要相应调整为 who,如果主语是复数的话,别忘了把 is 改成 are。


万能句 6


In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse.

考虑到问题的严重性,在事态进一步恶化之前,必须采取有效的措施。


这句也是超级“实用的废话”。一个字都不用改。


万能句 7


In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past. 

在过去的几十年,先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。


句式提炼:

In the last decades, advances in                   have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past. 


在这里,medical technology 可以替换成某种药物,或者某种具体的医疗手段,大家发挥想象。这个句子可以用来替代烂大街的 “With the development of ...” 


万能句 8


In fact, we have to admit the fact that the quality of life is as important as life itself.

事实上,我们必须承认生命的质量和生命本身一样重要。


句式提炼:

In fact, we have to admit the fact that                   is as important as                .


万能句 9


We should spare no effort to improve our life styles.

我们应该不遗余力地改善我们的生活方式。


句式提炼:

We should spare no effort to _____________.


我们的作文中,在谈到怎么解决问题、提出一些举措或者解决方案的时候,完全可以把这个句子卖弄出来,稳妥可靠不踩雷。


万能句 10


This view is now being questioned by more and more people.

这一观点正受到越来越多人的质疑。


看,多漂亮的过渡句!直接整句套用,一个字都不用改!


万能句 11


This issue has caused wide public concern.

这个问题已经引起了广泛关注。


也是超级实用的废话,可整句套用,放在开头第一段,妥妥的。


万能句 12


A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that vitamin supplements can substitue natural vegetables and fruits. Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that excess intake of supplements can cause side effect and they should consume vitamin supplements under physicians' instructions.

许多人存在这样的误解,认为复合维生素可以替代水果蔬菜。显然,他们忽视了过量服用维生素会产生副作用这一事实,他们其实应该在医生的指导下服用。


句式提炼:

A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that                     . Obviously, they seem to fail to take into account the basic fact that                       and they should                        .


这里给大家提一下句子中的 tend to, 这个短语看似多余,实则不然,它在这里起到软化口气的作用,使作者的观点听上去不那么绝对。大家细品一下。


万能句 13


It is commonly thought that our society has been dramatically changed by modern science and technology, and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology over the recent decades.

人们普遍认为我们的现代科技使我们的社会发生了巨大的变化,近几十年人类在科技方面取得了惊人的进步。


句式提炼:

It is commonly thought that our society has been dramatically changed by __________ , and human had made extraordinary progress in ___________ over the recent decades.


这个万能句可以用在文章一开头,只需要在横线上填入文章主题关键词即可。比如你要写一篇人工智能与医疗行业发展的作文,就可以套用这个句子,写成:

It is commonly thought that medical industry had dramatically changed by artificial intelligence, and human had made extraordinary progress in AI over the recent decades.


是不是特别简单?这样漂亮地道的句子在文章开头洋洋洒洒铺陈开来,相信阅卷老师也会眼前一亮,不由自主赞叹一声“学霸!”。


万能句 14


Depression is the fisrt mental disease which endangers people. At present, there are 121 million people suffering depression and the number is still clmibing.

抑郁症是危害人群最大的一种精神疾病。目前有1.21亿人患有抑郁症,该病患人群仍在不断增加。


句式提炼:

              (此处填疾病名称)is the fisrt               (此处填描述该疾病性质的形容词) disease which endangers people. At present, there are              (此处填数字) people suffering                and the number is still clmibing.


这个句子看似简单,实则环环相扣,逻辑高明。在疾病类主题的作文中,这个万能句是非常棒的开场白。


万能句 15


The problem of insomnia has caused wide public concern over the recent years.

近些年,失眠的问题引起了社会广泛关注。


句式提炼:

The problem of ________ has caused wide public concern over the recent years.


学到了吗,“引起关注”要写cause concern,不要写cause attention。


万能句 16


The following four are generally taken as major hazards of antibiotic abuse.以下是滥用抗生素的四个主要危害。


句式提炼:

The following ______(这里填数字)are generally taken as major ______(这里可以填hazards/reasons/benefits 等词)of antibiotic abuse.


在作文中,我们往往需要例举并分析某事物的多个理由、危害或好处等,这个万能句是一个不错的总起句。


万能句 17


Vaccination may well open the door to the prevention of coronavirus.

接种疫苗很可能为预防冠状病毒打开了一扇希望之门。


句式提炼:

________ may well open the door to _________.


在文章结尾,当你需要展望一下未来,想表达“......会给......带来某种希望、解决方案等等”的时候,强烈建议大家用小白老师的这个万能句,一是形象生动,文采斐然;二是这个句子没有难词,好记,不容易出错。


万能句 18


In conclusion, we must take into account this problem rationally and place more emphases on the relationships between doctors and patients. Any government that is blind to this point will pay a heavy price.

总之,我们应理智地考虑这一问题,重视医患关系。任何政府忽视这一点都将付出巨大的代价。


句式提炼:

In conclusion, we must take into account this problem rationally and place more emphases on ___________. Any government that is blind to this point will pay a heavy price.


像这样光荣正确的实用废话,多多益善,只要往横线上填个名词或名词短语就能用,操作太方便了!


万能句 19


It' high time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the problem of high charge of medicine.

有关当局应该采取适当的措施来解决药价高的问题。


It' high time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the problem of _________.


强调句也是非常加分的,有机会一定要卖弄出来。


万能句 20


In terms of risks of heart diseases, it is acknowledged that there are two aspects: one contains some uncontrollable factors, such as age and hereditary factors; the other involves some controllable roles, such as smoking, obesity and high blood pressure. In addition, unhealthy lifestyle is another potential risk: unbalanced diet, lack of physical exercise, pressure and depression, which result in sub-health.

目前公认的心脏病危险因素包括两个方面。一是不可控的,如年龄和遗传因素。而是可控的,比如吸烟、肥胖和高血压等。另外,不健康的生活方式也是潜在的致病因素,比如胡吃海喝、缺乏锻炼、紧张压抑等,种种这些都导致了亚健康状态。


句式提炼:

In terms of risks of _______, it is acknowledged that there are two aspects: one contains some uncontrollable factors, such as age and hereditary factors; the other involves some controllable roles, such as smoking, obesity and high blood pressure. In addition, unhealthy lifestyle is another potential risk: unbalanced diet, lack of physical exercise, pressure and depression, which result in sub-health.


这个万能句可用于绝大部分健康类主题作文,往横线上填上疾病名称,后面的危险因素根据具体情况微调。把这个句子背熟,考试的时候你也可以拽拽长句,秀秀实力。统考作文要求写200词,我们把这个万能句往试卷上一写,60 个词就有了。


好了,今天就到这里了。大家读完本文,有没有对作文信心大增呢?赶快来留言跟小白老师说说吧!


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