跟着M君做改错

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原文

Optimismand pessimism are both powerful forces, and each of us must choose which wewant to shape our outlook and our expectations.（1）There are enough good and bad in everyone’s life—ample sorrow and happiness, sufficient joy and pain—（2）find a rational basis for either optimism or pessimism. （3）We can choose to laugh and cry, bless or curse. It’s our decision. From which perspective do we want to view life? Will we look up in hope or down in despair? （4）I believe the upward look. I choose to highlight the positive and slip right over the negative. （5）I am an optimist by choice as much as in nature. Sure. I know that sorrow exists. （6）I am in my 70s now, and I have lived through rather than one crisis. But when all is said and done, I find that the good in life far outweighs the bad. （7）An optimistic attitude is not a luxury; nor it’s a necessity. The way you look at life will determine how you feel, how you perform, and how well you will get along with other people. （8）Converse, negative thoughts, attitudes, and expressions （9） fed on themselves; they become a self-fulfilling prophecy. （10）Pessimism creates a dismal place where no one wants to live in.

参考答案及解析

1、将are改为is

2、将find改为to find

3、and改为or

4、将believe改为believe in

5、将in改为by

“by nature”是固定搭配，意思是“就其本质”

6、将rather改为more

7、删除nor

8、将converse改为conversely

9、将fed改为feed

10、删除in

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