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2022年度写作比赛小学组一等奖作品

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“Sheng Guang's work is an excellent submission. Very detailed and complete. You completed all the tasks in a creative and thoughtful way. Keep up the good work."


(“Sheng Guang 的作品特别优秀。非常详细和完整。以创造性和思维严密而巧妙的方式完成了信件的内容。继续加油哦!”)


同时学生还整理出来了作品中的同义词和作者Roald Dahl在另一部经典作品《Matilda》中的精彩片段。


Invitation Letter from Mr. Fox

1. Invitation

Welcome to our FANTASTIC FEAST! This feast was first held by our fantastic Mr. Fox, every day he will go to steal food and drinks from three mean farmers, so you can eat like a king every day.



To get to the feast you’ll have to travel deep down to an underground village, you must wait until all the animals arrive at the dining room. The main course will always be the plumpest hen, four glorious young ducks, a few fat geese, and a couple of nice smoked hams and bacon! For vegetarians, you can have ten bunches of the juiciest carrot you ever taste! For the drink, we have the most miraculous, fabulous, and the most beautiful cider in the world! After the feast, you will feel like you just ate or drink some melted gold, sunbeams, and rainbows! I hope you will come and join us, have a great day!


2. Mean Farmer

If there is one more mean old farmer in the book ‘Fantastic Mr. Fox’ I think I would name him Bernard. Bernard would be the worst person you ever met, He was the cow and sheep farmer, those animals lived all over the field. Mr. Fox didn’t bother him much, because fox dislikes beef or lamb. He looked like a fine person, but deep down he was greedy and mean. His house looked like a small war ruins, everything in the house has broken down. Every day he only ate breakfast, it was just a few crumbs of bread and a glass of milk, this meal gave him an envious heart. Please don’t think he was a poor farmer, he kept all his money in a box larger than his bed! Also, he was the most coward farmer of them all.


3. Synonyms

  Word: fantastic. 

        Great         Eccentric

        Good         Unthinkable

        Brillant      Unbearable

        Super        Glorious

        Amazing    Fascinating

        Terrific       Superb

        Fabulous      Astounding

        Excellent      Phenomenal

        Awesome     Wonderful

        Extraordinary  Incredible

        Impressive

        Outstanding

        Remarkable

        Tremendous

        Miracle

        Marvelous

        Unthinkable


4. Synonyms

 Word: ravenous.

       Starved

       Starving

       Famished

       Hungry

       Unfed 

       Undernourish

       Malnourished.


Bonus: Limerick poems

‘An epicure dining at Crewe

Found a large mouse in his stew.

Cried the waiter, “Don’t shout

And wave it about

Or the rest will be wanting one too.”

                     -- ‘Matilda’

                     By Roald Dahl.



2023年中小学春季课程表




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