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20180113托福写作真题解析

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2024-09-04

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真题解析


Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is a waste of money for government to fund to space travel or space exploration. 

这是道经典老题,与之相似的题目为: 

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Instead of spending money on the exploration of outer space, the government should spend money on the improvement of the environment. (2010年8月)


针对2018年1月13日考题,相较于教育类和工作类等话题,学生对于该题还是有些猝不及防的,因为类似的素材平时积累的并不是很多,所以在理由段展开中,举例相对比较困难。所以建议大家,针对独立写作的十大类话题,一定要注意平时的多多积累。

独立写作常考的十大类话题为:

教育成长,决策工作,个人成功,儿童问题,

媒体传播,休闲娱乐,环境保护,朋友关系,

科技进步,政府政策

针对2018年1月13日考题,分析如下:


观点

同意:it is a waste of money for government’s fund to space travel or space exploration


理由1:

Investment in space exploration is huge, which is a great pressure on government budge. (unlike other areas, space exploration need more advanced technology, more talents with specific techniques and knowledge, and so on, all of which will exert great pressure on the government. )


理由2:

There are more urgent areas that call for government funding, such as medical care, education, economic development etc. (Government should spend money on education, because this practice not only conforms to the interests of the majorities but also cultivate various talents for the successful development of our country.)


观点:反对(it is not a waste of money to ...)


以下为关于benefits of space exploration的相关内容,供各位阅读

选自CNN---http://lightyears.blogs.cnn.com

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Health

During the early Apollo missions, scientists needed precise images of the moon’s surface in order to land the first man on the moon. In the 1960s, NASA’s Jet Propulsion Laboratory created digital image processing, an innovative technology that uses computers to enhance images of the moon. In the medical field, scientists and researchers found that this technology could be used to enhance images of organs in humans. Today, digital image processing is used in Magnetic Resonance Imaging and CT scans.

Medicine

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Before Dan Carter joined NASA in 1985, developing large amounts of protein crystal was a challenge. He and colleagues discovered that space-produced crystal could be used to make the atomic components of albumin(PDF), an essential human protein. They founded a called New Century Pharmaceuticals in 1997. Their findings helped lead to the development of a cancer drug combination approach and skin care products.

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Communications

Satellites play an instrumental role in how we communicate and navigate the world. In the 1960s companies including AT&T and RCA partnered with NASA and other space agencies to build and place satellites in the Earth’s orbit. Global positioning systems, television networks, radio stations and cell-phone carriers are all dependent on satellites to keep the world connected.

Environment

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When the Saturn 1B launch stand (used in several Apollo missions) was disassembled, it was stored away in an open field. No one knew until years later that the launch stand was coated with a paint containing polychlorinated biphenyls (PCBs), a toxic chemical that was seeping into the Earth’s soil. Quinn and her colleagues created the Activated Metal Treatment System (AMTS), a paste-like solvent solution that extracts PCBs from paint without removing the paint itself. The innovative system has been redesigned since then to remove many forms of contamination and pesticides on land.

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Governments have done enough to educate the people the importance of a balanced lifestyle and healthy eating.

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