2018年1月27&28日托福独立写作分析

各位好，今天主要针对2018年1月27日和2018年1月28日的托福写作进行相关的分析讲解

2018年1月27和1月28两场考试中，均为三选一题目，对于三选一题目，我们在之前的相关讲座中已经讲解过如何提升文章的说服性，即为选择一项后，要对剩余的两个项目进行一定的“反踩”分析，这样可以更好的体现出“三选一”之“最”---最好，最重要等等

比如针对三选一题目，我们之前跟各位分享过一题，可以先进行相关回顾

If your teacher says something incorrect in a class, what will you do? 

1. Interrupt your teacher right away 

2. Keep silent 

3. Correct your teacher after class

推荐：选择correct your teacher after class

优：

1）correct your teacher after class: sufficient amount of time to fully discuss with teacher, figure out the right answer, help students to master the knowledge much better

2）the relationship between the teacher and student can be better maintained if the teacher’s mistake is corrected after class.

针对理由1，反踩参考：keep silent: teacher may not be aware of the mistake, students may suffer from the wrong explanation of knowledge, detrimentally influence their academic performance

针对理由2，反踩参考：interrupt your teacher right away: jeopardize the integrity and the pace of the teacher and class, students will start to doubt the teacher’s ability or lose faith in the teacher, possibly influencing the relationship between the teacher and student

针对三选一考题，也可以参考一下2017.12.09 独立写作考题分析

Which one is the most important for high school teachers? (students aged 15 to 18)

1. The ability to give advice about planning for future.

2. The ability to recognize students that need help.

3. The ability to encourage students to learn outside of the classroom by themselves.

那么针对12.09的考题，可以选择the ability to give advice about planning for future，理由思路如下：

1）  这会让学生更加自立，15-18岁的小孩马上就要成年，在这个关键时期，他们需要想好未来做什么，为自己做一个细致的计划和打算，所以老师在这个关键时刻应该承担起一些责任，通过对学生的了解，给出相应的计划建议，对孩子的未来更有帮助

2）  这会让学生培养出一个良好的习惯，凡事做打算，未雨绸缪，从而可以在现阶段的学习和以后的工作中，都可以更加有效，事半功倍，老师如果能够给出好的advice，从而可以更好的让学生在今后的学习或者生活中取得成功。

通过上面两题的分析，如果各位记得我们上课和相关讲座中讲解过的三选一题目的处理方式，那么对于2018年1月27和1月28两场考试中的三选一题目，处理起来应该会相对比较容易

2018年1月27日考试

Which one of the following factors do you believe is most important in helping students succeed in their studies at college or university? Why?

1. Having access at the university to tutors who can provide individual instruction for students who have difficulty with schoolwork

2. Having the support and encouragement of family and friends while attending university

3. Receiving a high-quality education from excellent teachers while in high school

中文解读：

学生在大学要取得学业上的成功，下面哪个是最关键的因素：

1. 遇到学习问题时有人单独辅导

2. 来自家人朋友的支持和鼓励

3. 高中受过高质量的教育

2018年1月27日独立写作考题重复2017年3月25日考题，当然该题的题干信息相对比较多，所以在审题的时候，一定要理清题目主干---“什么因素”对于“学生在大学要取得学业上的成功”最关键，以防出现跑题的现象，针对该题，建议选择“Receiving a high-quality education from excellent teachers while in high school”

理由如下：

On the one hand, the high-quality education from high school can help students to resolve problems more effectively and more timely by themselves. (Specifically, in the process of acquiring high-quality education, students are bound to master relevant skills and comprehensive knowledge, which can help them to resolve problems and to some extent, the ability to analyze problems, find solutions and resolve them is the essence of success)

针对该理由可以反踩第一个选项：however, if students constantly rely on the tutors when they encounter some academic problems, they are unlikely to make an attempt to find solutions to solve problems by themselves anymore

On the other, if students can receive high-quality education in high school, they are more likely to adapt to the college life. (Precisely, in regard to students’ study, those high school teachers are stricter than their college counterparts, either in or after class; therefore, students who are well-educated in high school would become more self-disciplined and self-motivated, undoubtedly helping students to form right attitude toward their study or life)

针对该理由可以反踩第二个选项：nevertheless, it cannot be denied that friends or parents are always encouraging us on our positions, and thus, sometimes can hardly analyze the problems objectively; accordingly, reliance on them cannot help us fundamentally

2018年1月28日考试

2018年1月28日考题继续延续三选一题型

The government wants to make investment to improve education. Which one of the following investments do you think is the best?

1) To hire more teachers to teach in small class

2) Preschool education before kindergarten

3) To provide some training courses so that teachers can be more professional

中文解读：

政府希望投资提升教育，下面哪种投资最好：

1）  招聘更多的老师，进行小班教学

2）  学前教育

3）  提供培训，让老师更专业

该题中的信息量相对不大，所以理解起来应该不是很难，题目的主干信息即为---which aspect is the best for the government to invest to improve education? 建议选择第三点“To hire more teachers to teach in small class”

理由如下：

On the one hand, hiring more teachers guarantees each student more individualized attention from the teacher and with fewer students in a class, each student will interact more with the teacher, eventually inspiring students’ enthusiasm or interest in study.  

针对该理由可以反踩第一点：学前教育很大程度上只是基础能力的培养，在学术方面，很难得以体现，但是教育的提升，与学术提升关系更加紧密，所以帮助不大。

On the other, a smaller class size brought by abundant teachers will provide teachers the ability to really understand their students’ strengths and weaknesses, which can help them to individualize their lesson plans, and the problems from students can be resolved more effectively

针对该理由可以反踩第二点：教学再专业的老师，在面对众多学生的时候，也无力去详细的了解每个学生，对于教育的提升，需要耗费更多的时间和资源投入。

以上就是针对1月27和1月28日的两场托福考试中写作部分的分析，三选一题目在2017年爆炸性出现，这个趋势在2018年仍会持续，所以希望各位考生在备考过程中提高对三选一题目的关注，更要知道，对于三选一题目如何才能更好的提高文章本身的说服性。

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