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2018.05.19

独立写作考题：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Physical exercise is more important to older people than to younger people. 

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

中文解读：

体育运动对于老年人重要还是对年轻人重要

总体来说，5.19日考题相对比较简单，因为physical exercise的benefits还是比较容易想到的；只是在比较benefits的时候，要针对老年人和年轻人思考。

比如，physical exercise的好处中，最明显的一个就是help people to keep healthy physically and mentally, 以下话术供大家参考：

(选自http://www.linkedin.com)

Physical exercise fights against chronic diseases, such as heart disease and osteoporosis. More and more doctors, in their medical profiling are asking about the levels of your physical exercise program. Even with no cartilage in your knees; through a program of regular exercise, you can build up the muscles surrounding the knee joints so there is very little pain of bone rubbing bone. You can prevent or manage high blood pressure by regular physical exercise (provided you have reduced or eliminated) the high levels of processed and/or fat saturated foods. If you are experiencing a challenge with high cholesterol, exercise boosts high-density lipoproteins (HDL) or the “good’ cholesterol while decreasing triglycerides, or the “bad” cholesterol. This keeps your blood flowing smoothly by lowering the buildup of plaques in your arteries. This could save you the pain and anguish of bypass heart surgery or a pacemaker somewhere down the line. 

针对该题，我个人比较推荐more important to older people，参考理由如下：

On the one hand, doing physical exercise regularly can help older people to improve their health and then reduce the risk of getting disease. （compared with younger people, older people are eager for a good health）

On the other, instead of staying at home and suffering the feeling of loneliness, doing physical exercise can also enable the elderly go outside more possibly and then enlarge their social network, helping them to maintain mental health

当然，如果选择more important to younger people, 理由也是比较好找的，比如：

年轻人学习压力，工作压力都比较大，定期的锻炼可以让年轻人更好的释放压力，保持比较好的心情，从而可以更好的投入到学习或者工作中

the young always suffer from the pressure from their study and work; therefore, doing exercise regularly is more likely to help them to release pressure and maintain a good mood, enabling them to devote to study and work more passionately

因为年轻人的生活习惯在不断的改变，更多的年轻人选择宅在家中，打游戏等等，所以导致身体素质下降，从而定期的锻炼，也可以让年轻人保持身体健康due to the change of lifestyle, a growing number of youngsters prefer to stay at home, playing games, watching movies and so on, causing the decline of their physical quality; thus, regular physical exercise can help them to still maintain a good health, which is of great significance to them

同类题目练习

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：

The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than to older people.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

It is better for older people to take risks and explore new things than young people

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