20180526托福写作真题解析

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2018.05.26

独立写作考题：

When you do some tasks that need creativity, do you prefer to work with others or do them by yourself?

该题最主干的比较信息是work with others和work alone，所以我们可以先思考如下：

首先，各位可以分别考虑一下work with others和work alone的优势

work alone：

1）Working alone enables people to save a lot more time than they would when working with others.

2）Working alone gives people complete control over their work and enables them to enact their own ideas.

work with others：

1）More ideas can be sparked off when we choose to work with others, which can help to improve the quality of one task to some extent

2）Working with others can help to improve the working efficiency and effectiveness

针对该题，虽然主要比较的是work with others和work alone，但是大家别忽略题干中的一个背景信息do some tasks that need creativity。所以，在展开文章的过程中，必须结合该背景信息进行展开讨论——如果没有提及该背景信息，那么，作文就会出现“部分跑题”。一旦跑题，独立写作的分数会很低，所以一定要注意。

针对该题，理由以及展开内容如下：

1）When we choose to work with others, it is inevitable for us to communicate or share ideas with each other; afterwards, through reasonably weighing merits and demerits of our ideas, our mind can be refreshed, horizon can be broadened and imagination can also be sparked off, which enable us to collect the best ones and then ensure the creativity of the task.

2）If we opt for working with others, the whole task will be allocated to each of us and the effectiveness and efficiency can be better ensured, which means that the time required for finishing the task can be reduced, and therefore, the rest time can be spared for us to collect more relevant materials or information from different platforms like books, the internet and so on; accordingly, the creativity of the task can be enhanced to some extent.

同类题目练习

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：

A group will be more helped by a person who is willing to do things that other members want than a person who strongly insists on things in a way that is different from that other group members want.

(2017.02.18)

整体来说，这道考题延续了16年下半年的出题风格，题干信息相对绕人（这个点一定要注意，上课强调过无数次了），但是只要认真读题、分析透彻，还是可以理解清楚的：

以下A和B两种人，哪种对会更好的帮助group

A: a person who is willing to do things that other members want

想法，方法，做事风格等与小组其他人一样

B: a person who strongly insists on things in a way that is different from that other group members want

坚持自己的想法，方法或者做事风格

参考解答：

能够帮助的group，必然会让小组在处理事情中可以效率更高，更容易让group work成功等等

选择A

理由1：the person who is willing to do things that other members want can help to increase the efficiency and effectiveness

理由2：the relationship between team members is more likely to be well maintained if a person wants to do things others want 

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