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20180825&26 托福写作真题解析

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2024-09-04

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2018.08.25


独立写作考题:


You may choose between two professors who will be teaching a course that you must take at your university. If the following statements are the only information available to you about the differences between the two professors, which professor would you choose? Why?

--One professor was voted most popular in a survey of students about their teachers.

--One professors has just been given an award for outstanding research.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples.


题目特征:

双选题,教育类话题,题干信息量相对较大


题干信息解读


该题信息可以精炼为:

大学选课时,更加倾向于选择哪位教授的课程?

1)学生票选中最受欢迎的教授

2)刚因杰出研究获奖的教授



该题整体来说,难度不大,学生拿到手之后应该是有话可说——毕竟选课对每位学生来说,已然不陌生。针对自己选课时考虑的因素以及为何会有该考虑因素,再结合题干中所提供的两种教授特点,自然会找到展开作文的思路。


比如,选课时,我们会考虑“whether is the course academically beneficial to us or not?””whether is the professor friendly and attractive or not? ”等等,思考之后,再结合题目中所给特点(voted most popular; just awarded for outstanding research)进行分析即可


针对该题的参考思路,针对“教授受欢迎”,很容易想到,理由如下:

01

教授风趣,讲解清楚简单,让学生积极参与,很会激起学生的参与热情和兴趣。


The class offered by the popular professor can be rendered to be interesting rather than inflexible or vapid, easier for students to be attracted and then concentrated, inspire students to participate more actively/more opportunities can be created for students to interact, spark off the passion and interest from students, study more effectively and efficiently.

02

教授受欢迎,意味着学生与老师的互动或者交流很多,因此更容易发现学生们的相关问题,必然可以针对性的给出建议,从而让学生在学习中获得更多提高


It cannot be denied that students are more willing to interact with the most popular professor, more interaction or communication in or after class, easier for the professor to notice where the student is not good or proficient enough academically, offer some suggestions to the point, help students to academically improve themselves more easily.



2018.08.26


独立写作考题:


Imagine you need to improve ur performance in order to get better grades or higher work payment, which way would you choose?

-doing more extra work or assignments that are required

-participate more actively or contributing your own idea more frequently in the group discussion


中文解读:

为了提高薪资或者学习成绩,需要提升我们自己的“表现”,以下两种选择中哪个更好

1)做额外任务;2)小组中表现积极



题干信息解读


该题整体来说,难度不是很大,因为该题中涉及到的主要方面跟学习和工作挂钩,因为对于学生们来说,并不陌生。


要注意的是,该题目中存在相关背景信息---In order to get better grades or higher work payment,所以,对于题目中出现“背景信息”在2018年的考试中,出现的次数还是比较多的,比较代表性的是2018年6月10日和5月26日的考题,如下:


2018年6月10日

In order to adapt to the life in university and succeed, if you are a freshman, which method do you think is better: 

1. attending a one-week orientation or introduction program when you are in the university campus and before classes begin;2. meeting regularly in your first year with students in your major field who have entered the university for several years

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


2018年5月26日

When you do some tasks that need creativity, do you prefer to work with others or do them by yourselves?


针对题目中出现相关背景信息,在之前的多次考后分析中都有提及,需要注意的是:在展开文章的过程中,必须在理由段展开中存在相关相关话术去点及该背景信息,否则,作文就会出现所谓的“部分跑题”,一旦出现,独立写作的分数叫不是很漂亮了,所以一定要注意!!!


针对该题2018年8月26日考题,可以选择:doing more extra work or assignments that are required,理由如下


On the one hand, doing additional work or assignments can help us consolidate the knowledge or experience.


针对该理由的论述展开为:

doing additional work or assignments---we have to face and deal with more problems---in that process, the possibilities for us to notice where we are not good or proficient will be increased---do some things to make up for that---help us to better consolidate the knowledge or experience---enable us to further understand the major or work---more possibly for us to defeat our competitors---therefore, get higher salaries or positions(最后的阴影部分主要是针对题目中的背景信息进行点及,以防段落展开中存在部分跑题;另外,如果解释论述不够,可以给出相关具体案例)


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