2018.10.27&28托福写作真题解析
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2018.10.27
独立写作考题：
Which way do you think is the best for a student to make new friends?
1) joining a sports team
2) participating in community activities
3) travelling
2018.10.28
Which ONE of the following actions do you think is most important for a country’s leaders to take to ensure the prosperity and success of the country? Why?
-Creating jobs for unemployed workers
-Improving agriculture and ensuring low food prices
-Improving access to affordable housing
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目解析
10.27和10.28日的两场考试，均为三选一题目，这也是我们一直强调的题型。它的处理方式和展开架构，基本和二选一题目相似；只是要注意的是，在展开文章过程中，尽量对没有选择的两方，进行一定程度的反踩、从而突出自己选择的内容是三者中最佳选项。
针对该“注意点”，在今年的所有三选一考试真题回顾中，都有相关分析讲解比如以下这个题目，比如：
The government wants to make investment to improve education. Which one of the following investments do you think is the best?
1） To hire more teachers to teach in small class
2） Preschool education before kindergarten
3） To provide some training courses so that teachers can be more professional
中文解读：
政府希望投资提升教育，下面哪种投资最好：
1） 招聘更多的老师，进行小班教学
2） 学前教育
提供培训，让老师更专业
该题中的信息量不大，所以理解起来应该不是很难。题目的主干信息即为---which aspect is the best for the government to invest to improve education?
建议选择第三点“To hire more teachers to teach in small class”
理由如下：
On the one hand, hiring more teachers guarantees each student more individualized attention from the teacher and with fewer students in a class, each student will interact more frequently with the teacher, eventually inspiring students’ enthusiasm or interest in study.
针对该理由可以反踩第二点：学前教育很大程度上只是基础能力的培养，在学术方面，很难得以体现，但是教育的提升，与学术提升关系更加紧密，所以帮助不大。
On the other, a smaller class size brought by abundant teachers will provide teachers the ability to really understand their students’ strengths and weaknesses, which can help them to individualize their lesson plans, and the problems from students can be resolved more effectively
针对该理由可以反踩第三点：教学再专业的老师，在面对众多学生的时候，也无力去详细的了解每个学生，对于教育的提升，需要耗费更多的时间和资源投入。
通过以上题目的分析，我们在可以采用相同的展开方法对10.27和10.28的考题进行分析展开，如下：
10.27—— 选择 Joining a sports team
理由1：joining a sports team can make it more efficient and more frequent for students to interact with each other
可以反踩travelling：对于学生来说，旅行的机会必定不多，而且在旅行途中需要顾虑太多，特别是与陌生人一起旅行
理由2：a relatively more relaxing atmosphere can be created for students by joining a sports team
可以反踩participating in community activities：参加社区活动，一般情况下学生们还是需要去完成相应的任务，彼此为了得到更好的结果，肯定更加专注于自己手头任务
针对10.28的考题理由展开思路如下
选择 Creating jobs for unemployed workers
理由1：the society’s enduring security can be more possibly ensured if the government creates more opportunities for the unemployed.
可以反踩Improving access to affordable housing：很难实现，因为一旦housing方面进行相关调整，其他与housing相关的经济产业肯定会受到负面影响
理由2：creating jobs for the unemployed can largely promote the economic development sustainably and healthily
可以反踩Improving agriculture and ensuring low food prices：降低food的价格，必定会需要政府的相关补贴，并且也会导致生产food的相关人群或者产业受到影响
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