20181117托福写作真题解析
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2018.11.17
独立写作考题：
Which is the most important factor that affects the lasting time of friendship?
1) always helping each other when meeting problems;
2) having similar interests and views on important things; 3) trusting each other completely
中文翻译：
哪个因素最影响友谊的维持
题目解析
该题为三选一题目，这也是我们一直强调的题型。对于该题，处理方式和展开架构，基本和二选一的题目相似，只是要注意的是，在展开文章过程中，尽量对没有选择的两方进行一定程度的“反踩”，从而可以突出自己选择的内容是三者中最佳选项。
针对该注意点，我们在之前的相关专题讲座和考前预测分析中进行过相关讲解，比如下面这道2018年1月28的考题（大家也可以回看对应的公众号推送文章）
The government wants to make investment to improve education. Which one of the following investments do you think is the best?
1） To hire more teachers to teach in small class
2） Preschool education before kindergarten
3) To provide some training courses so that teachers can be more professional
中文解读：
政府希望投资提升教育，下面哪种投资最好：
1） 招聘更多的老师，进行小班教学
2） 学前教育
3） 提供培训，让老师更专业
该题中的信息量相对不大，所以理解起来应该不是很难。题目的主干信息为which aspect is the best for the government to invest to improve education?
建议选择第三点“To hire more teachers to teach in small class”；理由如下：
On the one hand, hiring more teachers guarantees each student more individualized attention from the teacher and with fewer students in a class, each student will interact more with the teacher, eventually inspiring students’ enthusiasm or interest in study.
针对该理由可以反踩第二点：学前教育很大程度上只是基础能力的培养，在学术方面，很难得以体现，但是教育的提升，与学术提升关系更加紧密，所以帮助不大。
On the other, a smaller class size brought by abundant teachers will provide teachers the ability to really understand their students’ strengths and weaknesses, which can help them to individualize their lesson plans, and the problems from students can be resolved more effectively
针对该理由可以反踩第三点：教学再专业的老师，在面对众多学生的时候，也无力去详细的了解每个学生，对于教育的提升，需要耗费更多的时间和资源投入。
高分考生 例段参考：
On the one hand, hiring more teachers to teach in small class enables teachers to provide personalized education to each student. To be more specific, thanks to having more teachers to teach in small class, each student can undoubtedly acquire more attention from the teacher, enabling the teacher to be better informed of each student’s advantages and disadvantages. Therefore, the teacher can more possibly provide each student with more personalized education, which helps the student have a better mastering of the knowledge, so the overall education quality can be better improved. However, although teachers are provided with more courses to be more professional, when they still face too many students, they cannot efficiently and effectively put what they have learnt theoretically into practice and it is still hard for them to figure out the problems existing in each student’s study. For example, last year, more teachers were hired in our university, and thus, each teacher merely needed to teach five students; shockingly, the average score of our school increased by thirty percent when compared with that of the year before last year. Obviously, we can learn from the example that students can be offered with personalized education if more teachers are hired to teach in small classes.
2018.11.17
Which is the most important factor that affects the lasting time of friendship?
1) always helping each other when meeting problems;
2) having similar interests and views on important things; 3) trusting each other completely
利用前面提到的方法，针对11月17日考题的理由段展开思路如下：
可以选择：among the three factors, trusting each other is the most important key to the lasting time of friendships.
因为足够信任，彼此之间愿意想彼此袒露心声，让彼此更加了解彼此，对彼此的依赖更强，自然有助于友谊的维持。
参考表达：trust completely, confide in each other, know about each other, increase the reliance on each other, beneficial to long-lasting friendship
针对这个理由，可以选择“having similar interests and views on important things”进行反踩：
兴趣相投或者对于某些问题的想法相同、只能促进彼此沟通，而对于友谊的维持，相对比较表层，当遇到相对深层次的问题时，如果不能够彼此足够信任，还是容易产生一定的问题、不利于友谊长存。
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