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单词回顾 | 他们都是如何用“favor”和“chemistry”造句的?

2017-06-01 Justin 孟庆伟英文写作


5月28日的单词是“favor”,有“prefer”的意思,它的名词形式“preference”和形容词形式“preferable”也很常用,可以用在想要突出比较和强调的句子中。


下面是几个句子点评:


1. Chances favor the prepared minds. 


点评:很好的句子。这句话通常被认为是法国生物学家 Louis Pasteur 最先说的,一般用单数:

Chance favors the prepared mind


2. We are supposed to favor behaviors which can contribute to society. 


点评:这句话中“favor”虽然用的比较恰当,但句子本身比较空洞。建议可以写得更具体一点。


3. According to Charles Darwin's opinion, natural selection favors the species which can adapt to the environment.


点评:想法很好。开头部分一般说“according to Charles Darwin”或“in Charles Darwin's opinion”。


4. When it comes to holiday-making, some favour a relaxing beach holiday, while others prefer a hectic sight-seeing tour.

点评:这句中用了“favor”和“prefer”,可见前者可以替换后者,以达到词汇多样性的效果。由于句子一开始用了“holiday-making”,后面的“beach holiday”还可以写作“beach vacation/break”。



5月29日的单词是“chemistry”,事实上在课堂之外这个词更常用的意思是“默契”,可以用来指异性也可以指同性,可以是浪漫的关系,也可以是兄弟情、战友情、队友情等。


下面是5个句子点评:

1. Macron and his French teacher's love story tell us there must be special chemistry between them.


点评:这里一般不说“tell us”,而会用“suggest/indicate/imply/reflect”等表达。这句可以这么改:


(The newly elected French president-elect) Macron and his French teacher's love story suggests/indicates that there must be special chemistry between them. 

2. The chemistry between Suarez and Messi greatly contributed to the success of Barca in 2015. 

点评:很好的句子,和自己熟悉的球队和赛季结合了起来。Way to go! 


3. The chemistry between the writer and readers in this WeChat Public Platform means a lot.

点评:在某某平台一般用介词“on”。语境选择的很好,甚至可以多写一点:


The chemistry between the writer and readers on this WeChat Public Platform means a lot; it could even shape its style


4. The two are not a good match, the chemistry between them isn't right.


点评:逗号应该改为分号。


5. Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie felt the chemistry when they were cooperated and filmed a movie "Mr. and Mrs. Smith".

点评:"cooperate"没有被动语态,用在该句中也欠妥。可以这么改:


Brad Pitt and Angelina Jolie felt the chemistry when they were filming the movie "Mr. and Mrs. Smith".



题图:谷歌创始人 Larry Page 和 Sergey Brin。


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