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单词回顾 | 他们都是如何用“norm”和“characterize”造句的?

2017-06-15 Justin 孟庆伟英文写作


6月4日的单词是“norm”,非常实用、好用,希望下面的句子能帮助大家更好地体会这个词的用法。


下面是几个句子点评:


1. In a normal society, we should accept the people who behave differently from what you consider to be the norm.


点评:由于前面用了“we”,后面的“you”应该改为“we”或“most people”。

2. In many cities, gridlock has become the norm, not just at rush hours but every day.

点评:“gridlock”用的很好,可以同义替换“traffic jam”和“traffic congestion”。更准确来讲,“every day”应该改为“during all/most hours of the day”,才与前面的“rush hours”形成对应。


3. It has been the norm that I use emoji to end every conversation in WeChat.

点评:“emoji”的复数形式可以是原形也可以在后面加 S。表达在某个平台,比如 Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, Wechat 等,一般用“on”。


4. In Chinese feudal society, widows were forbidden to remarry for this was considered as a departure from the norm.


点评:很棒的句子,“a departure from the norm”这一表达很精彩。注意“consider”后面不需要加“as”。

5. Wechat has already become the norm to the point that even the middle-aged people nowadays uses it to chat.


点评:就句义来看,中年人使用微信不太能说明什么吧?想突出它的流行建议这里可以改为老年人或者具体说“50-year-olds”。注意“the middle-aged people”是错误的,要么是“the middle-aged”,要么是“middle-aged people”。另外“uses”应是复数形式。



6月5日的单词是“characterize”,是“characteristic”的动词形式,可以和前面几期的“signature”一起来学。


下面是几个句子点评:

1. Harmless disposal of disposable medical appliance may characterize the future of waste disposal.


点评:“appliance”在句中应该用复数形式“appliances”。

2. AIDS is a fatal disease which is characterized by weakening or even disappearing of the immune system.

点评:“weakening”前面要加“the”;感觉“disappearing”这里用“loss”更好。而且丧失的应该是细胞的免疫力,而不是免疫系统,所以“the immune system”改为“body's cellular immunity”可能更准确一点。


3. This week, test-takers will be taking the Gaokao college-entrance exam, which is used to being characterized by a defining point to a Chinese student. I congratulate those who get a high score. And I hope that those who do not receive high scores remember that there are many paths to happiness, and most of them do not depend on a single exam.

点评:我会这么写这句话:


This week, test takers will be taking Gaokao, China's national college entrance exam, which has long been characterized by being a defining point to high school students. I congratulate some of them on getting a high score. And I hope that those who do not receive high scores remember that there are many paths to happiness, and most of them do not depend on a single exam.



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