2018年9月独立写作真题解析合集

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2018.09.02

独立写作考题：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is the best way for teachers to help students become more interested in a subject by explaining how this subject can help students live better outside of the school.

题目特征：

该题重复2014年12月6日，中国大陆2012年11月10日和北美2011年10月08日考题，主要考察“老师如何培养学生对于一门学科的兴趣”。

题目解析

确实，School teachers are supposed to play an essential role in promoting and finding out how to motivate students to excel in school subjects and it is universally acknowledged that sparking off students’ interest in the subject is the most important，但是关于培养学生对于一门学科的兴趣的方式，存在着很多的争议；题目中认为最好的做法为：highlight the relevance that subjects have on students’ lives.

该题属于托福独立写作中常见的绝对词题目，对于这类题目，建议采取否定的态度、给出否定的理由，并且针对help students become more interested in a subject给出更多的做法即可。这样展开文章，思路会更加宽泛。

针对2018年9月2日考题，例段展开如下

On the one hand, it is probably a more effective way for teachers to enhance their teaching methods in order to attract their students’ interest in one subject. Precisely, undoubtedly, in order to advance teaching skills, the teacher should definitely devote much more time and energy into designing the way to teach, leading to the involvement of interactive teaching such as introducing games, group discussions, and role-play instead of the way to present knowledge traditionally by teachers themselves; therefore, the teaching modes can be developed to be more various, which could be helpful in promoting the active participation of students in learning; therefore, students’ interest in the subject can be increased to large extent. 针对explaining how this subject can help students live better outside of the school进行稍许反踩. (举例论证)+结论句

类似题目分析

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Spending time alone is the best way to relax our stress.

否定：个人观点——spending time alone is not the best way to relax our stress=some other ways are more ideal for us to relax our stress.

防止跑题：解释句内容之后，举例论证之前，对题目中的做法或者说法进行稍许“反踩”

On the one hand, staying with friends is better for us to relax our stress. To be more specific, staying with friends---B---C---D---better for us to relax our stress. 针对spending time alone进行稍许反踩. 举例论证+结论句

反踩话术供参考：However, if we merely choose to stay alone, our attention can hardly be distracted and thus, we are more likely to bury ourselves in the tedious troubles, undoubtedly leading to too much pressure on us.

2018.09.08

独立写作考题：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Professors should prohibit the use of devices that can connect to the internet in class.

题目解析

该题即为分析课堂上禁止使用科技产品的利弊。

众所周知，with electronic devices prevailing in people’s lives, the equipment with internet access has become increasingly prevalent, accompanying students nearly from now and then；当然，a great controversy as to whether lecturers should prohibit the employment of these devices during the classes也成为现在人们讨论的话题，毕竟，对于课堂教学，电子产品有利有弊。

其实，拿到题目后，我们可以注意到这么一个看似不关键但是还是有很大帮助的信息 —— in class，因为这个信息可以提示我们，在课堂上，涉及到的人物角度有两方面，professors and students，所以我们展开文章的思路可以从这两个角度思考，即为多角度思考问题。这么一来，思路就比较多了，比如，学生在学习中的效率，学生在学习过程中创造力的培养，老师在教学过程中的便捷等等。所以针对，该题，同意或者反对，均有话可说。

Disagree的个人观点为：Professors should not prohibit the use of devices that can connect to the internet in class, 理由例段展开如下：

On the one hand, the use of devices that can connect to the internet in class can to large extent help students better master the knowledge. Precisely, due to the access to the electronic devices, much convenience can be brought to students, enabling them to resolve puzzles in time through searching for some relevant information or materials on the internet instead of burying them in the puzzles for a long time; therefore, their study efficiency and effectiveness can be enhanced greatly, which can help them to master the knowledge more comprehensively and more radically. 举例论证+结论句

当然，“Agree的情况（即”prohibit the use of e-devices）的理由也是很好展开的，比如：if the students are permitted to use the e-devices that can connect the internet, students may be distracted greatly by various things, such as playing games, watching online videos, searching for some trivial and popular topics and so on, leading to their confusion of knowledge presented by the professor, and thus, their academic performance can be detrimentally influenced ultimately.

类似题目分析

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Today people cannot buy products based on information in their advertisements because advertisements are less honest than before.

针对该题，我们只要从advertisement着手，联想三个和advertisement相关的群体，理由自然就来了；比如，看广告的customers，比如管理广告的the government department，比如利用广告的companies or enterprises；其实，这三个角度基本就可以给我们带来三个很好的理由了, 理由如下：

1) customers today have the ability to judge the authenticity of advertisements

2) companies do not dare to make the fake advertisement, considering the long-run reputation

3) the governmental department has carried out some relevant strategies to ensure the reality of the advertisements

2018.09.09

独立写作考题：

In universities, people tend to concern more about the career prospect of the subjects they learn. Some people propose that students should learn subjects for a fast job growth including math, science, technology, and engineering even if they are interested in other subjects. Do you agree or disagree? （重复2016年11月19日）

题目解析

该题为教育类话题，并且是“学课选择时，学生应该更多的考虑以后的工作还是自己本身的兴趣”的题目。

话术引入为: in this day and age, when it comes to the choice of subjects, a relatively larger number of students always consider much more about their future job instead of their real interest because they want to put what we have learnt theoretically into practice and then can make sure that their job can be more secure. However, sometimes, the interest is also a significant factor that cannot be ignored in that as the old saying goes “interest is always the best teacher”, which can also be greatly supported by the saying from Steve Jobs that “having a genuine interest in something can't be faked and it's the surest way to succeed and the only way to do great work is to love what you do”.

理由段展开如下：

On the one hand, opting for the subject that greatly interests us can more possibly help us to achieve higher goals. Undoubtedly, when we decide to choose the subject we are interested in, our motivation can be to large extent sparked off, pushing us to devote more time and energy into it, and therefore, it is more likely for us to figure out our deficiency concerning the subject, in terms of which, we then can do much more to improve ourselves, greatly helping us to master the knowledge related to the subject much better, so our academic performance can be magnificently enhanced, which can help us to achieve higher goals in the field we choose. 举例论证+结论句

类似考题回顾

2018年9月2日

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

It is the best way for teachers to help students become more interested in a subject by explaining how this subject can help students live better outside of the school

2017年9月9日

Your friends have the opportunity to choose either one of two types of majors (fields of study), which one of the following two majors do you think is a better choice, and why?

2016年10月22日

Some teenagers take part in kinds of activities, such as musical classes, sports classes and so on, but others only focus on one activity which is important to them. Which idea do you support?

2018.09.15

独立写作考题：

Do you agree or disagree with the statement:

It is better to spend money on traveling and vacation than save money for the future (重复2015年6月13日)

题目翻译：

你是否同意以下观点：花钱旅行度假比为将来存钱更好

题目解析

该题同意或者反对，思路还是比较好找的，分析如下：

同意：

1）旅行可以放松身心，从而提高工作效率；

2）旅行，特别是跟朋友或者家人的旅行，可以增进家人之间的感性

参考话术：relax ourselves mentally and physically, improving our working or studying efficiency and effectiveness; travelling with friends or family can help to reinforce the relationships

反对：

1）旅行不是必需的，因为相对比较耗钱，还不如存起来以备将来不时之需；

2）旅行虽然可以放松身心，但是也会有很多不安全因素，到时候为此花费很多，不值得

参考话术：

travelling is relatively costly, especially when we opt for travelling abroad, and the money can be saved for a rainy day; possibilities to encounter some insecurities, it is not worthy of paying for that

2018.09.16

独立写作考题：

If you have time to learn something new, which of the following would you choose?

1) to play sports;

2) to learn cooking;

3) to learn to make jewelries

题目解析

该题是三选一题目，也是暑假之后第一次出现的三选一题目。相比较今年到目前为止出现过的三选一题目，9.16日出现的还是比较简单的，对于学生来说，文章展开思路比较多，特别是选择to play sports，并且如果有同学练习过2018年5月19日的考题，相关话术可以套用。

2018年5月19日考题如下：

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Physical exercise is more important to older people than to younger people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

针对5月19日考题，选择more important to younger people, 理由也是比较好找的，比如：

年轻人学习压力，工作压力都比较大，定期的锻炼可以让年轻人更好的释放压力，保持比较好的心情，从而可以更好的投入到学习或者工作中

the young always suffer from the pressure from their study and work; therefore, doing exercise regularly is more likely to help them to release pressure and maintain a good mood, enabling them to devote to study and work more passionately

因为年轻人的生活习惯在不断的改变，更多的年轻人选择宅在家中，打游戏等等，所以导致身体素质下降，从而定期的锻炼，也可以让年轻人保持身体健康

due to the change of lifestyle, a growing number of youngsters prefer to stay at home, playing games, watching movies and so on, causing the decline of their physical quality; thus, regular physical exercise can help them to still maintain a good health, which is of great significance to them

以上两个理由以及思路展开完全可以套用到本次考试中。

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