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专四写作 | 环境问题是否靠个人的努力无法解决? - 范文

2017-04-05 蔡雷英语

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自2016年起,专四考试写作部分改革,要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。出现的新题型:命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。


考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是,在写作过程中,概述材料和进行评论缺一不可,而且概述材料不宜过长,否则将可能被扣分。


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题目要求

      

Are the environmental problems too big for individuals to solve? This matter has been intensely discussed for years. The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your views on the issue.


Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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审题思路

本题讨论环境问题是否靠个人的努力无法解决。在具体行文方面,考生首先要总结概述正反方的观点。然后给出自己的观点:环境问题的解决需要个人和政府共同付出努力,两者相辅相成,缺一不可。最后总结全文。


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高分范文


Are the Environmental Problems Too Big for Individuals to Solve?


      Since our earth is faced with the unprecedented environmental challenge, environmental protection has become an urgent issue for governments and ordinary people. Some people are of the opinion that no effort is too small in terms of environmental protection because it needs everyone’s help and participation to optimize the living surroundings. However, there are different voices insisting that only governments and large companies can make a difference in solving the problem.


     Personally I hold the perspective that the joint efforts of both governments and individuals are indispensable in settling environmental concerns fundamentally and neither can work effectively without the other. For one thing, governments’ regulations and supervision can make full use of the considerable manpower and material resources consistently devoted to tackling environmental contamination. For another, without the participation of common people, every green policy enacted by the authorities will end in failure because it is human activities that have the greatest influence on the environment through all recorded history.


      All in all, individual support plays an important role in implementing governmental policies on environmental improvement and resisting the acts of destroying environment. In the meantime, the government should also shoulder its responsibility to make its people live in a safer and healthier environment.


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