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专四写作 | 对裸婚的接受程度 - 范文

2017-04-06 蔡雷英语

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自2016年起,专四考试写作部分改革,要求根据所给的题目、图表或阅读材料等,写一篇200词左右的作文。出现的新题型:命题+材料作文对考生的阅读理解及归纳能力提出了更高的要求。


考生可以采取“简短概述材料—评论—总结”的写作模式。值得注意的是,在写作过程中,概述材料和进行评论缺一不可,而且概述材料不宜过长,否则将可能被扣分。


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题目要求

   

The following chart shows the different attitudes of men and women towards down-to-earth marriage. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart, state the reasons and give your comments.


Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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审题思路

本题属于图表作文。从柱状图可以了解到男女两性对裸婚的不同态度。行文时首先简单描述图表内容,然后从男女对婚姻的要求及现实社会生活两方面具体分析男女不同的观点及成因,最后总结自己观点。


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高分范文


The Acceptance of Down-to-earth Marriage

The chart above clearly demonstrates the different attitudes towards down-to-earth marriage between men and women.

We can see clearly from the chart that the percentage of male respondents supporting the idea of down-to-earth marriage is much higher than that of female ones. There is no doubt that this reflects the difference between man and woman. For one thing, it lies in their different demands for marriage. The majority of women focus on the sense of security. After all, marriage is not equal to love, and the basic material foundation is necessary, especially after married. Meanwhile, they take material foundation as the reflection of man’s responsibility. For another, to some extent, it is the consequence of the actual social reality, such as the high living standard, high wedding cost and more free and independent minds. Taking into account what has been discussed above, we can arrive at the conclusion that the findings that men and women have distinct attitudes towards down-to-earth marriage are consistent with the differences between the two genders as well as with the development of society.

I believe that the percentage of people supporting the so-called down-to-earth marriage will change constantly as time goes on. 

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